IN THE LONELY HOUR

note II.

So, I would like some criticism. The constructive kind would be nice.

Is it bland? Is it almost always sidetracked? I'd like to confirm it so I could improve this fanfiction and my future fan fictions as well.

Thank you for the votes, people who did. And to those who didn't, thanks for reading this at least.

ALSO I am so sorry for the abundant profanities. I will keep it out/keep it to a minimum.

-kai.

P.s. I am sorry I told you it was coming soon, but school work and stuff. You know how it is.