Who Is The Detective?

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Entity303_Love: Now that we are all here, DingusIsLost was eliminated upstairs.

Ashley: when?

Ally: we're not sure

Archito The Cheeto: So... what do we do

Entity303_Love: *shrugs* ... Whoever is the murderer! We will close our eyes and you eliminate someone!

Nova: What?!?

Entity303_Love: you heard me! Close you're eyes! 

Everyone: ... *closes their eyes*

Ally: ... but how am I supposed to eliminate someone when I'm not sure if you are secretly looking?

Everyone: *opens eyes* Wut

Ally: ...

Entity303_Love: *takes out her bow and points it at her*

Alisha: 0_0 please, no, no, I'm only joking, put the bow down, no, NO!!!

Ashley: ... *laughs*

Nova: *shakes head and laughs*

Archito The Cheeto:  *raises eyebrow and claps*

Entity303_Love: 0_0  well... um... ok *puts bow away*

Nova: you know, there is so much thought on who is the murderer, but who is the detective?

Ally: huh, good question.

Entity303_Love: honestly, it might be better if we don't know, let's just split up again.

Ashley: ok

Everyone split up again. Archito The Cheeto stayed on the same floor they were on with Entity303 Love. Ally, Ashley and Nova all went downstairs.

???: *secretly following Nova*

Nova: *stops walking and sighs* another dead end *turns around to see Ally* um... hi?

Ally: where were you?

Nova: What?

Ally: where were you when you fell down the trap?

Nova: ... I came down here... why?

Ally: I don't think you just came here, I think you went back up to the top floor... and eliminated DingusIsLost

Nova: *steps back* No!

Ally: *pulls out her bow* I think you used Billy's mystery elimination to your advantage, manipulated us onto your side, saved Entity303 Love to get us to trust you more and that YOU are the murderer.

Nova: *backs up to the wall* that's not true!

Ally: *points the bow at her*

???: STOP!!!!

Ally: *turns around*

Nova: *looks behind Ally*

Ashley: *pointing a bow at Ally* Put the bow down!

Ally: *eyes widen in surprise but then quickly go back* I see you got a bow

Ashley: ... always... had it

Ally and Nova: What?!?

Ashley: *takes a deep breath* I'm the detective

Nova: ... hold up

Flashback to chapter 8: Who's The Murderer?!?

Entity303_Love: I just got a bow! *holds up a bow*

Alisha: *stops what she is saying and turns to Entity303_Love* 

Ashley: ... um... good for you?

Entity303_Love:  Finally! This is SO much better!

Ashley: if I got a bow, I would keep it a secret until I really needed it.

Entity303_Love:  Well I'm not you.

Ashley: *face palms*

(A/N  Thats right, I was foreshadowing and no one caught on... I think)

End of flashback

Nova: wait, but what about when we were taking turns collecting gold?  I COULD OF GOTTEN A BOW A LONG TIME AGO!!!

Ashley: *shrugs* I was just going to give my gold to you

Nova: WELL... uh... *shrugs* ok.  But you could of told me you were the detective, I would of understood you standing over Billy like that.

Ashley: didn't want the murderer to know I was the detective

Nova: oooooooooooh

Ashley: anyway, stop convicting Nova of being the murderer! If she was the murderer, she would of eliminated me.

Ally: not exactly.  We were all just together upstairs, yet here we are.

Ashley: well...

Ally: exactly

     Ally turned around to eliminate Nova, but she wasn't there. Ashley must of been trying distracted her.
      Suddenly, this loud voice came.  The voice seemed to come from everywhere, but it didn't really seem to have a source.  "Detective has been eliminated, bow has been dropped" said the voice.  Ally turned to face Ashley, but she was eliminated.  Hovering over her, was the bow.  The loud voice came again a few seconds later, "Player has picked up the bow"





     This chapter had 623 words in it.  I FINALLY decided who to eliminate.  There was SO much thought going into this, believe me.  So sorry if you are someone in the book who has been eliminated, but someone has to be eliminated. It's not personal, don't worry.  I have a good ending that I think you will like, so stick around!  Hope you enjoyed this chapter and have a great day.

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