INTRO....

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Hey everyone!

It's a collaboration work of me and
??????

It is revealed at the end of this part...
😂😂😂

This is a different  attempt to show raglak love story...

Basically, a family story...

Let's see how the story goes...

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Scene opens in a big bungalow spread over acres...

With many servants running here and there...

And a woman in her 60's is yelling at everyone to make the arrangements..

"arrey kaamchoro! Jaldi jaldi Karo...
Mera babu is on the way.

He is back to us after 5 years... "

"prabha! U r taking tension for no reason...

Look there... Our gudiya is doing all the work perfectly... "

The old man in his late 60's shows a young girl busy in decorating the wall with flowers...

"haan ji... When she is there... Half my tension is gone.

But only I know how much I missed my babu...

U won't understand all that... "

She says casually but to see a lone tear escape from that man's eyes...

She bends her head and her eyes also brim...

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Scene opens in London...

A man in late forties is seen talking over the phone...

A young and modern girl is seen twisting her lips at her mom...

"mom! Will go somewhere... I am bored of London... Same house...
Same college... Same parties...
Same people... "

That man "haan rajan! I am ready for the collaboration... "

Rajan "thank u so much sir... U need to come India... For the meeting "

That  man "sure rajan... "

Rajan "how's doctor sahibha? "

That man chuckles seeing her pout face...

"doc sahibha is angry on us as we r not taking her anywhere in the vacation...

Next month her internship starts... "

"oh nice... Sir, I have a guy for her in my mind.

He has just done with his internship and is returning home...

What say? "

"she will kill us if I even take the name of marriage... "

That girl is seen glaring him... She snatches the phone...

"hey rajan! Don't u try speak of my marriage... I won't marry any idiot.. "

"accha! U say this after seeing him... "

She smirks...

"challenge accepted... "

She glares her dad again...

"baby girl! "

"I don't want to hear anything... " she yells...

"will ur anger comes down if I say we r going India for vacation... "

She turns back with wide eyes and mouth and hugs him...

"India? OMG I am so excited.. I have never been there but heard lot about it... "

She jumps and goes to her room...

His wife keeps hand on his shoulder...

"ji! R u sure...? "

"han dear... Till how long, we stay far from India.

Look how excited she is...

She has lived alone all this while though she has a very big family there...

Not any more... "

Both their eyes brim...

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That's all for now...

My coauthor is none other than Vm9627....

It's time to scratch ur heads ...😂😂😂

And let me know who is who...

Next u ll get the character sketch...

Babu?

Gudiya?

Baby girl?

So u all know she won't give easy guesses so think properly and tell who is who....

And what about others...???

U ll get another update by tonight...

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