I Took a Walk

Hey yall im new to this so i hope yall enjoy it and excuse my not using the commas semi collens etc correctly i just wanted to try and write this please comment and vote, thanks!!!!! :D no hate please i wont listen to it . love yall <3

One day I decided to go for a nice long walk on the beach. I needed to clear my head after the big fight I just had with my best friend, Stacy. We have been friends since I moved here, when I was three years old. We never fight this is the first real fight we have ever had. Sure we argue about little things but this was huge. It was about her recent boyfriend hat had just broken up with her. He was a jerk and I saw it but she didn't, I said that she was in a bad relationship but she wanted to get back together with him. So we got into this huge argument I didn't know what to do, so I left.

As I was walking I could here panting a little ways behind me, so I looked back. It was Stacy chasing after me. I left the house a good ten minutes ago so I was aways ahead of her. I stopped so she could catch up to me because I knew there had to be something important she wanted to tell me. I wated until she reached me. "I ssssoooo sorry Mary I knew he was a jerk but I didn't want to admit it" she sounded really out of breath. "I'm sorry to Stacy, I actually expected worse because you seemed so happy at first." We started down the beach again, this time together."Mary!" i heard my name being called behind us. It was one of our guy best friends Collin. "OH HEY COLLIN!" I yelled down the beach.

We waited until he caught up. "Hey Collin" Stacy and I simultaniously siad. We turned to eachother and laughed, I guess we had made up so I smiled to myself looking down. We have been friends with Collin a very long time too. Along with our other guy friends Cade, Nate, and Thomas. "How did you know where we were?" Stacy asked, we were both thinking it. He looked at us like we were crazy. "WHAT! stop looking at us like that it was just a question!" "Woah little missy slow down there" he held his hands up in front of him. "What do you mean you looked at us weird" Stacy chimed in, I had almost forgotten we had a fight today. "Never mind, so what are y'all doing walking by yourselves so late. You know its dangerous to do that" he waggled hi eyebrows at us. Stacy and I both smacked him in the shoulder.

I hope yall liked it please coment and vote its my first book im doing on here. I didnt end it right because i want to know what yall think. Please dont be afraid to comment CONSTRUCTIVE criticism no hate please. THANK YOU LOVE YALL!!!! :D