GAME OVER! (3rd story)

Death note

As I then came to where max was I then transformed back to human... that's when it had hit me max hadn't reached his demon formed yet... as I then looked at phantomonom then at max "good job max... she disurved it!" Phantomonom said as max then looked at him and nodded as phantomonom then smelt something,as he got up and gave max an ugly look, he then punched him as I then grew worried "U LIAR!" He said as max crashed to the floor as he then snapped his fingers "guards! Bring her to me!" He said as rake and red angel then came and got me as I then tried to fight it! As they brought me to him max then got up! "AGH! Don't PUNCH ME!" Max said as he punched phantomonom as phantomonom came down "oh ur not following you orders! Sees HIM!" Phantomonom said as more guards came as they took max phantomonom then took a knive out as he came closer to max... as max snapped to himself... as he then cried "poor max! He wouldn't follow orders... so there much be consequences!" He said as phantomonom had an evil smile on his face as he came closer to max he then stabbed him AS I GREW ANGRY! AND TRASFORMED BACK TO MY DEMON FORM! "YOU BASTARD!" I said as I came running to phantomonom said as he then stared me in the eye as his eyes lid bright purple.... as I then blinked my eyes grew RED! As they then rapped chains around me phantomonom then came to me as he stabbed a knive in my arm "AGGHHHH" I said as I had no control of my power... as I then blacked out....
{a few hours later}
"We're am I..." I asked as I appeared in the darkness as I then looked around "lazari..." a voice called as he kid up a candle it was red as I then ran, a chain then pulled me back... "red..." I sighed as he came closer "where's stripes?" He said "I don't know... they took her..." I said as he looked down... "I may know we're She is at...but... there is other guards we won't be able to get to her..." he said as I looked at him with a dad look "what's wrong?" He said as I sighed as a tear dripped down my cheek... as I still remembered the stabbing of my sons death... as I looked up "nothing" I said as I sighed I knew I should of just done something... now that my husband... and my son... were gone this was going to turn into a bloody murder scene... as I looked at red angel my eyes, weren't the same, as I grabbed my knive... and looked at it as he looked at me, " your not going too..." he paused as I stared at him " your dad told u never  to" as he paused as I interrupted "HE ISNT HERE no more red... it's up to me! Think all u want... but I don't care what u do! I'm going to end THIS!!!" I said as grew tough and walked out.
I had no words... I had nothing to say... but the pain... and the memories haunted my soul.. as I carried on a straight face... I then looked at my scar.. as I kept forwards..
" Phantomonom the girl..." rake said as phantomonom paused and punched the wall " I KNOW! Im so stupid!" He said " she's gone..." rake continued as phantomonom looked up " What!" He said back " the last person that appeared was red angel" rake said " how typical of course red! I should if just killed him! QUICK lock him up!" Phantomonom ordered rake "what about stripes...and Rodgers?" Rake asked as phantomonom smiled "perfect! Fetch me them FAST!" He ordered rake as rake ran out.