Foreseen

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  • Dedicated to Kasey
                                    

Hey guys! I was talking with my best friend a couple nights ago and she said something and it came to me that it might be a good story idea. I have the unofficial description worked out. I will post it in this post. I would like you guys to give me your opinions. Should I write it? You let me know :)

I would dedicate this book and I give her credit for the idea even though she didn't mean for it to be. All we were talking about is how it seems like we get déjà vu a lot and how sometimes when we have a dream, that's exactly what happens throughout the day. Then it hit me that it COULD be a story and then I came up with all the other stuff that came together and made the story idea. Anyways, here it is.

We (humans) are born knowing what will happen in our lives up until age 20. There are very few who don't know and go through life never knowing. These people are considered Blind and for whatever reason, they can't see their future. There are a handful that can see their future their whole lives and even fewer who can see their whole life in terrifying clarity AND the people they are close to. These people who can see everything can be told apart from everyone else by one characteristic: their rainbow coloured eyes. They are known as the Seers. When the Red Moon approaches, everyone, whether you're Blind or not, is racked with visions they don't want. Everyone sees the same thing and it is always something horrific. Visions of blood shed, starvation, insanity, chaos, the Apocalypse, and things thought to be impossible are among the many things seen. Usually the visions the Red Moon brings are connected to all the previous visions given when the Red Moon appears. The doctors tend to be doing so many tests on the Blind that they never get to find out WHAT is so different about them that causes them to be Blind. But not Emily, she wants a normal life. She wants to find out what's wrong with her. Or maybe she isn't the messed up one. Maybe everyone else is. What is the truth behind being Blind? Is it possible they do so many tests to these people so that they won't find out the horrible, shocking truth? (I don't know if the description is good or not.)

So should I write it? Or no? And I realise that you may not understand how the lyrics connect with this story, but trust me. Some of it does and it was the only song I could find that somewhat connected with it. If you don't like the song, or that type of music, then don't listen to it. You could just look up the lyrics or something. You don't even have to do that.

Thank you to all who give feedback and always, always remember: I love each and every one of you! :)

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