chapter 5

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Love....

The best feeling in this whole world....

But the feeling when u see ur love dying in front of ur eyes is the worst feeling....

Neil's pov....

Me and avni were walking hand in hand on lonely road......

She gave me a beautiful smile which i immediately reciprocated....

Suddenly i saw the change in weather....

The white shiny clouds were now turning dark...

I look up towards sky which was covered by dark clouds...

And then i look at avni who was staring at dark sky...

The thing which made me frown was her sadness...

She was sad about something....

Before i could ask her she left my hand and starts walking away from me....

I was worried...

She was just walking away from me still looking at me sadly...

I tried to stop her but i guess she was adamant...

I started walking towards her but the distance between us was only increasing which made me worried like hell...

I called her but it went deaf in her ears. 

Suddenly out of no where she disappears making my heart wrench....

Neil(shouts):avniiiiiii!!!!!!!!

Pov ends.....

He wakes up shouting her name....

He was sweating badly and his face was pale....

He looks around and founds himself on hospital bed...

All runs inside hearing his shout..

Shweta immediately hugs him...

Shweta:tillu...tu...tu theek hai na...

Neil was all blank..he was not able understand anything..

Only one question was roaming in his mind...

"Where is she"

Shweta brokes the hug and kisses his forehead...

Bebe:neil..kaisa hai tu...

Next second they all get shocked hearing him...

Neil:Avni kaha hai....?

Shweta(shocked):av..avni...

Bebe:ne..neil..avni toh...

Neil:haa bebe..bulaiye na avni ko....main yaha hospital main hu aur voh mujhse milne tak nahi aayi..aap zara use call lagana...mujhe chinta ho rahi hai uski....

Shweta(teary eyes):neil..tu..tu kya keh raha hai..avni yaha kaise aa sakti hai....

Neil:kyun..kyun nahi aa sakti voh...aap bulaiye use...

Bebe:neil puttar...tu aaram kar..tujhe rest ki zarurat hai...

Neil:nahi bebe..pehle aap avni ko bulaiye...

Shweta:neil..maine kaha na..tu aaram kar...

Neil(shouts frustratedly):maine kaha na...pehle avni ko bulaiye...mujhe milna hai usse....

Shweta slaps him hard making others shocked...

Shweta(shouts):avni nahi aa sakti neil..kyunki voh mar chuki hai..mar chuki hai tumhari avni...she is dead..

Saying this she starts crying while neil went numb....

Others were also sobbing except one who was smirking evilly....

Neil:mo..mom..avni..avni zinda hai...maine..maine aap sab..sab se ek..ek baat chupayi hai...avni zinda hai mom....

Shweta(controlling her cries):tillu..avni...avni jaa chuki hai..4 saal pehle voh mar..mar chuki hai...

Neil(shouts):mom..yeh aap kya keh rahi hai...voh kahi nahi gayi hai..main kal raat ko hi usse mila tha..voh aayi thi mujhse milne mere room main...

Prakash:yeh tu kya keh raha hai neil..kal raat ko hum khud tere kamre main aaye the..aur phir humne suna ki tu kisise baat kar raha tha..

Neil:haa dad...voh avni..avni hi thi...aapne dekha naa use...

Prakash:neil..dekh..tu..tu pehle shaant ho jaa..aur meri baat dhyaan se sun...kal jab hum tere kamre main aaye toh tu apne aap se hi kuch baat kar raha tha..koi nahi tha tere saath..humne khud dekha...

Flashback

Neil(stammered):vo...voh i m...sorry..infact we are sorry...hume aap logo ko pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha...haina avni..

He turns around and gets shocked..

Because avni was not there...

Neil:avni..kaha ho tum..avni....

Shweta:tillu...

Neil:mom..avni..avni yahi thi abhi..ek min haa....voh naa kahi chup gayi hogi..

He starts searching in whole room shouting her name...

Neil:avni..ab dekho..sabko maine bata diya hai..ab tum bahar aa jao...avni...

Not able to find her he gets worried...

Neil(shouts):avni..dekho bahar aa jao..mujhe..mujhe dar lag raha hai..avni..plz...

He was on verge on crying while others were giving each other helpless look...

Neil:avni..

Shweta:tillu sun...

Neil:mom..aap..aap boliye na use bahar aane ko...plz..mujhe bahot dar lag raha hai mom...

He was madly searching her in every corner...

Neil(teary eyes):avni..kaha chali gayi tum....

Suddenly he falls unconscious....

Flashback ends..

Neil:dad...plz mera yakeen kariye..avni thi mere saath...aap log rukiye..main use leke aata hu...

He was about to get up but others stop him..

Shweta:neil..tu kahi nahi jayega....tujhe yeh accept karna hoga..avni jaa chuki hai...

Neil:nahi mom..voh..voh zinda hai..zinda hai voh..voh yahi hai..mere saath..mere paas...usne khud mujhse yeh kaha the mom...

"Sometimes ur heart needs more time to accept what ur mind already knows"

Same is the case with neil..his mind somewhere knew that avni is gone..she will never come back but his heart is not ready to accept it....

He was not listening to anyone...
One doctor gave him injection due to which his eyes became heavy...

Within a minute he fell asleep while others were sobbing seeing his condition......

After few hrs..

Neil wakes up when he felt a hand caressing his forehead..

Neil(weakly):av...avni...

Avni:main yahi hu neil...

Neil:plz kahi mat jaana...

Avni:main kahi nahi jaa rahi neil...

Suddenly the door of hospital room gets open and..........

Precap:is avni alive?? asked someone on phone

Man:yes boss...

So so so here is the next chappy..

Hope u like it..

Love Mamta

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