13.waiting for u

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Everyone r  in the garden, today is  the wedding anniversary of ram nd pinkey as per there ritual they r gng to there home town to visit there family temple
Yash: bachoo get in the car we r getting late it is 5 pm by 10 to 12 pm we will reach home get in fast
While elders Sat in there 8 seater car with there laguage carrying upon there car nd younger clan in another car that was the time when navya nd cabir marriage got fixed at the early age nd navya belongs to there home town nd there family is close to malhotra's nd mukti nd Nandu r bst frnds nd she know mukti will be her bhabi bcz mukti nd abhi love each other but they never expressed it
But manan case was different nandini liked or should say love manik but she never expressed him that bcz she know she can love, admire , feel moon but she can't hold him back to her so she never dared to express her feelings but only mukti know about her feelings bcz mukti caught nandini red handed while she is stareing at manik
Here also she stood nd admiring manik, 
Mu: stop ur admiring session nd hope on we r getting late
Nandini shyly nodded
Manik nd Nandini r in last seat while Abhi nd mukti r in middle where as cabir beside driver not to forget mukti was the one who pushed nandini beside bcz she like nandu as her bhabi nd she want to sit beside Abhi they started there journey nd it gonna take 6 to 8 hrs  almost nd there journey starts
Nandini nervously Sat beside manik , manik saw her nd smiled at her that is what she observed but cmg to manik he is observing her with lot of intensity bcz for the 1st time he is looking at her in salwar kamazz other wise she is always in her uniform, night dress or pants nd shirts so that he can't take his eyes away from her but our nandu is feeling so shy to look at him butterflies r running in her tummy manik is observing her every move he can understand something is happening to nandu or to say some feelings he jst want to conform  he shifted his eyes to his front seat nd saw mukti nd abhi r taking glances of each other time to time as everyone in the family know they love each other but scared to express it he signed in disbelief nd he looked at cabir saw him smiling like a fool
M: what cabir thinking about navya bhabi
This staggled cabir
C: n..o..no.. Nothing ahem nothing like that nd he kept his phone in his pocket
Remaining listening there convo
M: then what r u smiling at ? Raising his eye brow
C: it's jst a msg
M: msg from whom
C: arey mera bhai plz leave me it's navya msg we r meeting 2mw for the 1st time after our marriage is fixed that to after one year plz
Listening to him everyone smiled knowing he is madly in love with navya
Looking at them cabir off the small light in the car
Ab: cabir y did u off the light man
C: with light how can he drive nd with out light u can take some.... cutting cabir words
Ab: shut up cabir don't start it again
While mukti blushed turning her head
M:hmmm that's right
Teased them
Cabir offed lights in the car nd manik saw nandini looking at him when he saw her she turned her face nd bitting her lips
N: ayyo nandu what r u dng
Manik smiled listening at her even she said slowly
Then taking the advantage of darkness he moved towards nandini slowly as he observed everyone is busy in there own land
Nandini breath struck with his move
Whispers
M: do u want to say something to me nandini
Nandini immediately nodded her head as no
M: I'm observing u since few days do u have any kind of feeling for me
Nandini Sat still
N: ( mind) oh god he is observing me how fool I'm aaaaahhhhh
M: feel free to say anything to me , may b I feel same too
Nandini suddenly looked at him but darkness around to see his exact expression but she can feel him so close to her
Manik slowly kept one hand around her shoulder  but he can feel tension of her body he was about to remove his hand then nandini slowly started to cuddle him he got big smile on his face bcz some where down the line there feelings r same for each other but nandini is expressive nd manik is NOT getting nandini so close to him nd holding her tightly in his arms he entwined there fingers nd in middle started make chapati dough 🤪🤪with there hands
Its the beginning of there story

Present:
Manik phone is ringing in his pocket that brought him out of his thoughts then he removed his tears from his eyes nd picked the phone nd saw She is calling
M: hello ( dull tone)
She: WTH is this manik I'm calling u since forever y r not picking up my call ( shouting)
M: nothing like that say me Y r u calling
She: what happen
M:huh!!
She:What is happening manik
M: (looking at shirt nd reports he remember everything ) I lost something precious I don't know what to do now
She: means
M: nothing,  nd haa come to my home 2mw
She: y
M: even I also don't know,  so jst come
She: manik what is this without any reason.......
Cutting her Manik spoked
M:When I said that it's imp u to come her keep that in mind be here by 8 in the mrng 🤨
Nd without any response he cut the call

Flashback:
It was the time when nandini called manik when he was in London nd point to be noted this call is last but one that manan had talked to each other
Today nandini had a wired feeling that something is happening but she doesn't know that manik having other women in his life she is calling him continuously
In London:
Manik went to pub with her now manik was busy in admiring her with lot of intensity nd having a drink in his hands
M( in mind): I don't know when ever I see her I compare her with nandini,  look at her she is hot, she knows how to start conversation nd she can impress anyone by her talkative nature,  she is bold, she is confident unlike her nandini is always reserved nd nandini also don't know how to mingle with new person she kept herself to family,  clz, sometimes I don't understand y I got attracted towards nandini I mean she doesn't wear bold attair neither is confident enough to face anyone whenever she goes out she would have Abhi or cabir beside her or navya or mukti most of the times she asks my mom or badi maa to get things
His admiration nd thinking got interrupted by a call looking at caller id "nandini " he cut the call bcz he don't want to disturb his mood but nandini is calling him continuously he picked the call at the same time she came near manik kept her hands around his neck
M: WTH is this nandini when I'm not picking ur calls means I'm busy nd plz stop disturbing me 😬
N: manik listen
M: now what
N: r u ok,  I mean I have a wired feeling that something is happening 😔
M: what should I do than 😡
N: manik u r the only person who I can feel mine , I jst want to know that u r safe nd sound
M: 😠 I'm ok
Nd he cut the call
End
Manik pov:  how much difference they both have manik what r u thinking stop being stupid ok , now that family wants to meet her than let them decied nd I jst want everyone in the family to accept her bcz I can't go against my family 2mw nandu will get discharge nd everything with sort out
Like this that day came to an end everyone in there respective room's but no one could sleep everyone is thinking how the events turned out nd what 2mw mrng is stored for them

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