So this is another try at writing a story, I'll take as much feed back as I can. And I'm open to any mistakes being pointed out to me. And if this story is confusing... it's supposed to be.
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The False People
Short StoryAmberetta Zelderin, a breathing child of a "deceased family" sets out on a mission to find the soulful reason why they died and where to find the killers. But the closer she gets to the truth, the more lies she gets caught up in. The more lies she g...
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So this is another try at writing a story, I'll take as much feed back as I can. And I'm open to any mistakes being pointed out to me. And if this story is confusing... it's supposed to be.