Emotional one, I guess.
Judge it yourself.aastha_writesx I hope you liked it. I edited it a little. Gladly I didn't cry this time, I guess I became more tolerant towards emotional content..
Happy reading
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Maa jaldi se poha aur chocolates rakho bag mei mujhe late ho raha hai
Aa rhi hu tillu. Aram se
Maa jaldi aaj avni ka birthday hai agar mai late ho gaya toh wo mujhe kacha chaba jaegi, you know my jangli billi na??
Haa baba janti hu. Ye le teri avni ka poha aur chocolates aab jaa, she might be waiting for you.
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He reached there and found her waiting for him as usual.
Waah Mr khanna aaj aap jaldi aa gaye?? She taunted him.
Kaise nhi aata avni tumhara birthday jo hai. Happy birthday Jaan, he said hugging her.
I love you.
I love you too.
They spent a lot of time talking with each other..
He told her about his day, what all happened, about family...
Just then he remembers he has to leave has to meet ayesha maa and neela maa also. He shifts from his place and keeps his head on both of her maa's grave and cried his heart out.
Yes he's at the graveyard, where 3 most important women of his life were burried.
(The 1st one was of ayesha maa,middle of neela maa and last of avni.)
Though neela maa and avni died being hindu, their bodies were cremated but Neil wanted to keep them alive forever so they decided to bury their ashes in the yard.
He cried and cried. Even though it's been years but he hasn't forgotten anything yet. It was his fault she wasn't with him and he would never forgive himself. His tears dried but his heart and soul was still aching with the pain.
I'm sorry ayesha maa, I'm sorry neela maa aaj mere wajah se meri avni mere saath nhi hai I couldn't protect her, I promised you I would do that till my last breath, but I failed. She took her last breaths even before I could, I failed as a son in law, I'm Sorry maa. I'm sorry.
Today it was not just him weeping in front of his mother's but the sky too, because they got to witness the scene where a husband was pleading his wife to come back to him, allow him to hug her and say sorry to her.
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Flashback
Neil pranked avni and told her to meet him as soon as possible. Avni was informed that Neil met an accident, and nothing mattered in this world more than her husband to her, so she hurriedly left the house even though it was pouring out there. The sky was clearly indicating something bad, but she cared less. She was a mess, tears won't stop falling from her eyes, her vision was blurry and that's it, that's where everything went wrong. She didn't see the truck approaching her and they collided, the sound was as loud as a thunder. Nothing was left except for a body of avni who was grasping for air, but maybe the God had something else planned.Neil was called immediately by the passersby, but before he could reach her and talk to her, she decided to leave her body behind and move towards another land.
Neil was still crying resting his head on both the graves "maa mere ek majak ne meri avni aur mere bacche ki jaan leli. I'm a murderer. I don't know what went in my head when I planned that whole thing. I wanted to die at the moment i got to know about her, but I couldn't because of your daughter and her promise. I would have killed myself if I didn't listen to that audio, I wish I didn't listen to it.. Why did she ask such a thing?? We promised to live together naa, then why did she ask me to live in this world without her? With the guilt of taking 2 lives?? Why maa?? Why do I have to live when she has left me?? Whyy???
Avni's audio 🎙️
She was trying to breath, words were not coming out her, but she spoke because she knew it was her time to leave but she can't go without telling him what she wants to, she knows her husband, she knows he will kill himself if she wasnt alive, and she couldn't let her family lose 2 of their children's, afterall Neil was the only thing they had after her. "Neil mai jaa rhi hu. I love u neil, thank you for loving me, for accepting me. Mere jaane ke baad mummyji, bebe aur papa ka dyan rakhna.. aur ha tumhe jeena hoga unn sab ke liye humare unborn baby ke liye.... mere liye.. promise me you will live. Don't blame yourself, agar Neil nhi toh avni kaha, I hope you recover soon I LOVE YOU NEIL NOW AND FOREVER. I WILL MEET YOU SOON IN HEAVEN AND IN NEXT LIFE TOO, MEI TUMHARA PEECHA NHI CHORNE WALI. NEXT JANAM MEI BHI U R MINE...."(Avni said to recover soon to Neil because she thought he actually had an accident.)
Tere bina zindagi toh hai
Par jeene se aitraaz hai
Maane huve hain do dil
Lekin taqdeerein naraz hainTere bina zindagi toh hai
Par jeene se aitraaz hai
Maane huve hain do dil
Lekin taqdeerein naraz hainKehta hai kahaani
Ishq ka ye paani
Sab doobe saahil pe
Lekin koi koi aayeDil royi jaye, royi jaye, royi jaye
Aankhon ke kinare baitha royi jaye
Dil royi jaye, royi jaye, royi jaaye
Yaadon ke sahare betha royi jaayeTu nahi humkadam toh raste bure
Tu nahi toh neend bhi aankhon se hai pare
Khamakha hi pad gayi dararein khwab mein
Tere bin tanhaai si dhadkano mein chaleTere bin yeh gham hai
Kuch saansein kam hain
Kyon ki tujhko paane se zyada
Khoyi khoyi jayeDil royi jaye, royi jaye, royi jaye
Aankhon ke kinare baitha royi jaye
Dil royi jaye, royi jaye, royi jaye
Yaadon ke sahare baitha royi jaayeDil royi jaye, royi jaye, royi jaye
Dil royi jaye, royi jaye, royi jayeHe cried his heart out but soon it started pouring badly which reminded him of her words." tum roye toh mei bhi royungi kyuki we were born to share everything, samjhe Mr. Khanna, now smile".
It was getting late so he left as he had to live for his family but it was like God heard his prayer, he couldn't separate the two of them any longer so he decided to call Neil. He died the same way she did, his soul was finally at peace because it was with her now.
" Jo pyaar karne wale duniya mei nhi milte wo upar ki duniya mei zaroor milte hai "
(I was not planning to kill Neil but I just couldn't see him in pain. Do tell me if u wanted him to live or are you satisfied with the ending?)
I hope I have given justice to this story.
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