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The sound boomed in my ears, smoke smothered my eyes, my lungs we're burning. My eyes moved across and met Luke, he was still asleep. I looked around the room all I could see was clouds of smoke. The sound echoed around me. I pulled my arm up and shook Luke to wake him up. "Luke!" I yelled "I think there's a fire!"
Luke woke and coughed instantly.
"What's happening?" He screamed.
'I-I don't know" I shook my head and threw myself into Luke's arms.
We pulled the covers off us then lay our feet flat on the ground. I carefully stood up and grabbed Luke's hand. We ran to the door of our bedroom then quickly opened it. Flames we're before our eyes.
I looked at Luke and he looked at me, what was happening?!
"Don't let go of my hand!" I nodded my head repeatedly.
We ran out of the room dodging the flames. Luke looked at me every two or three seconds, he looked so scared. Just like me.
We ran in and out of rooms trying to find an exit, but there was no luck.I looked behind me to see flames catching up to us, I ran and ran. My feet hurt from all the running. There was burning wood everywhere all over the floor. Luke looked at me then back to the floor, but then fell. My hand left his.
"Just keep running! There's a clear path! Run now!"
"No! You told me not to let go of your hand!" "You've already let go of it! Just run now!" Luke screamed to me.
I stared into Luke's eyes then looked down to his hand, I grabbed it then tried to pull him up off the ground. Something was stopping me. Something was wrapped around his foot.
"Just go!" He yelled at me, his face turning red.
"I'm not leaving you!" I yelled back. Tears we're rolling down my face.
"If you don't leave now, the path will go! Wood will fall into it's place! This might be the only way out!" He shouted at me now.
"I'm not leaving without you! Even if it is the last way out!"
Luke yanked at his foot, trying to un tangle the wire wrapped around it. But it wasn't working.
The path was staring at us, mocking us, but I wasn't going to leave Luke.
My lungs felt like they we're on fire, they we're as hot as the sun. I pulled myself up off the ground and tried to find the kitchen.
"Where are you going! Come back now! Don't be so stupid, your going back into the fire!" Luke coughed.
"I need to find something to cut the wire!" I yelled.
I ran as fast as I could, until it lay in front of my eyes. A knife. It could cut the wire. I ran into the kitchen thinking of nothing but Luke. I grabbed the knife then ran back out of the room. My heart was slowly stopping. I ran back to Luke. I grabbed his foot and began cutting at the wire. After about 12 seconds of cutting the wire snapped. I looked at Luke then collapsed onto the hot floor. My heart hurting.
"C'mon, the passage is right there, we can make it!" Luke grabbed my waste and pulled me up. My legs all jelly, I walked five steps then collapsed back onto the floor. Luke grabbed me and picked me up like a baby.
Cold air touched my hot skin. People surrounded me. A man in a mask picked me up from the floor and stuck me into a ambulance.
"L-Luke? Where's Luke!" I screamed.
"Is Luke your boyfriend?" The man asked.
"Y-yes, now where is he!" I yelled.
"I'm very sorry, but he didn't make it. He was lying there with you, but he was already dead."
My head was spinning. I looked up at the man, I breathed in and out.
My boyfriend, was dead.
I looked up then everything became a blur, my heart slowly took it's last beat. I was back with Luke in heaven, finally at peace...
