Avni:how much more r u going to surprise me Neil she said looking up while breaking the hug
Neil:there is something left
Avni:kya?
Neil:come he said taking her to the balcony
As they reached to the balcony she saw how there was a small collage of them on the cake which made her smile she realised those pic were taken in Goa thanks to the background
Neil:chalo cut the cake.
Avni:let's cut it together she said taking Neil hand and made him hold the knife
As they were cutting the cake... Neil was looking at avni while she was looking at the cake
She took a piece and made him have a bite while he fed her too
Neil:chalo ready for your gift?
Avni :gift can be shown later Neil but abhi I want the answers to my question
Neil:ok then chalo sit
He made her sit on the small couch in the balcony and sat next to her.
Neil: avni I dont know how I fell in love with u I didnt realise my feelings for a long time yet I knew something was there.... but then when I realised that I love u and I want to spend my whole life with u I had decided to tell u that day... that's y I called u over
Avni:and here i thought u had called me probably to tell me about the divorce news but yh continue
Neil:u r mad... so then I had thought I'll confess I was all excited and nervous then u came in front of me but the accident happened.. I know I told u this when u came at the venue itself but still i wanted to say it again ...for a sec everything froze for me.. I couldnt beleive what I just witnessed...I...i was scared... I was getting my own reflection which was telling me that that I'm a fault ...everytime it would come to make me feel bad to make me feel that I should keep my distance to keep u safe ...bebe was the only one who figured out that i love u as I broke down in front of her ... I started to believe it that I should keep my distance avni I really did ....then when doctors told us u r safe but have weakness that's when it felt like I had got my oxygen back.
Avni gulped listening to Neil
Neil:then we all decided to come home I was with bebe Ali and riya and thats when bebe told Ali and riya in the car that I love u... they were not shocked in fact they had a *We knew it look* on their face...but I told them not to tell u or anyone as I didnt want u to have any pressure....My reflection kept coming back telling me to keep distance and somewhere it was convincing me to do that..then we reached to the hospital and I came to see u
Flashback
Chap 64( there was hidden scenes in the chap so do read this chap to know)Neil walked in to see avni on the hospital bed while there was few tubes which were connected to her body
He sat down and held her hand
Neil:u scared me avni...u literally scared me... for a sec I felt like I had lost u... I'm sorry this had to happen because of me but I'm also angry... was that phone so important that u was ready to risk your life...life is so unpredictable na it's like we r happy and the next min that happiness is taken away from us.. I had called u to confess my feelings and look what happend
He felt her fingers move slightly and looked at her
Neil:I guess this was a sign to stay away from u... so that u can be happy he said thanks to his reflection
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Fanfictionhey guys this is avneil story totally different from the current story line. the characters r all the same from naamkaran but portrayed in a different way. i have written this ff on a different forum and i am getting good response... i heard about...