alien the abomination

chapter 4 deception

Heeeeeeeey

Male:finally

-_- yeah yeah... I felt like u guys deserved a little something after the impossibly long wait... So without further ado... The dark nightmare...

... Alien POV ...

Dream

There was nothing but a misty fog surrounding me

(You have failed our race) said a scratchy female voice. The fog that surrounded me cleared and I saw my siblings. Lencara, chekkeyya, and even ventra. The limbs tied down and needles punctured with needles that where filling with there blood. (You have failed your siblings) said the scratchy voice again.

I run towards them but before I could get close. Ram into what seemed like an invisible wall. (You have failed your sisters) said the voice again. The three of them yowl in agony. I try to go around and run to my left but I'm blocked again.(you have failed your queen) I then go right and blocked that way to. I try going backwards... No use.(your mother). A large dark figure was forming over my sisters. Large crest and a long sharp tail came from the figure. I try and jump only to bang my head on the top of whatever was enclosing me in.

Dazing me.(your family) said the voice but it started to change. Sounding more male... Raspy and... Familiar... "YOU" said a voice he quickly recognized as his capture Mr weylands. "ARE" the shadow of his enslaver forms over his cage. But where his eyes should of been where 2 menacing red orbs. "MINE!" He yells and swoops in and my sisters yell and scream. The dark shadow engulfs me in pitch black darkness... and I wake up...

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Well what did ya t-

Male: WTF WAS THAT

WHAAT

Male: YOU CALL THAT A FREAKEN CHAPTER... I COULDA WROTE THAT IN 2 MINUTES AND I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO TYPE!

:/ yeah yeah... I promised something didn't I... Never said it would be huge...

Ventra: you've gotten a long time... There should of been more.

There is more... Just not enough of it yet to form the chapter like I wanted it to be... So I decided it had been long enough so I went ahead and posted the very beginning of the chapter... Added a couple things... And went ahead to post it... Now that's my next issue... I might be putting this on haitus for a bit cuz I don't want to dissapoint with promises I don't live up too... So until I can get around to typing I will have it on hold for a bit... BUT I AM NOT I REPEAT NOT ABANDONING THIS STORY... OK... OK

a couple more issues real quick.

Biggest issue that I need 2 know before I post next chapter is name... A reader of my works suggested 6 like from the AMAZING game alien vs predator... Who is my favorite character from the game... And that character is who inspired me to write this but there's some problems with that...

1... He was second born so calling him 6 wouldn't make since

And 2... Its a number... And I was hoping for a normal name to kinda make him more... Err... Human per say... Err... More relatable if it makes since... So sry no naming him 6 :(

Lastly is the male and chekkeyya shipping... Again its just an idea and I would like some feedback on this.

These both should tell u that I also want comments... I enjoy interacting with the readers and reading ideas and seeing what u guys think of my characters and all of that kind of stuff... It will help inspire me to continue writing this story same as votes do (plz vote 2 guys :D) so anyway guys... Stay awesome and don't give up hope on me... :)