Hi...sorry there was no update yesterday, had an extremely busy day.
Don't know why my chapters are all over the place. Annoying.
Anyway, here's a new part, hope you enjoy!
Harry and Louis were sat on their bedroom floor, Louis was helping Harry build a castle out of the Lego Zayn gave him for his birthday.
"This is gonna be the best castle Harry!" Louis said excitedly.
Harry nodded. He'd been very quiet today, he was feeling very tired. He didn't really want to build a castle, or anything for that matter, but Louis wanted to play, so he joined in.
"When we're done, I'll get my Playmobil people and they can be the royal family, their servants and the guards." Louis smiled. His other brothers were never interested in playing Playmobil. Even if he was 13 now, he still liked doing things like this.
"I'm just going to the toilet." Harry said as he got up, Louis nodded and carried on setting up the family, Harry walked out to the bathroom.
Harry had been gone for a while, Louis didn't notice as he was too engrossed in what he was doing. Zayn came into their room to see what they were doing.
"Wow! Lou that's really great!" He said.
"Yeah, well Harry did a bit of it too...did he go downstairs? I haven't seen him for a while."
"I haven't seen him since breakfast." He replied.
"Shit!" Louis got up and ran to the bathroom. He tried opening the door, but something was behind it, it wasn't locked, it was just hard to open.
"Go get Mum and Dad, quick!" Louis shouted to a frightened Zayn, who ran screaming down the stairs.
"Harry, is that you? Can you move away from the door so I can come in please?" Louis was frantic. He kept pushing but it wouldn't budge.
Everyone else can rushing upstairs.
"Harry! Liam shouted as he took over trying to open the door. He pushed quite a bit and felt movement. He moved slowly so as not to hurt Harry, and eventually he opened it enough so he could squeeze through.
He pulled Harry away from the door, and opened it letting Lucy in.
"Boys, go to your room a minute please?" Lucy asked, as they all went to Louis' room.
"Oh god Li, what's wrong with him?" Lucy asked, kneeling beside the unconscious boy.
"Call an ambulance, quick!" He responded as he checked for a pulse. He found it, but it was very faint.
*****
"Shit Lou what's happened? He looked dead! He's not dead is he? Please say he's not dead!" Zayn was crying into Louis' chest.
Niall was crying too. "Was he feeling ill?"
Louis sniffed. " No. He didn't say he was, he just looked tired. God I feel awful. He was gone for ages." All three boys were sat cuddled up and crying, not knowing what was happening down the hall.
They heard sirens. Louis jumped up and ran down the stairs to open the door, letting the paramedics in, and guiding them to the room where a very sick Harry was lying on the floor, his parents in anguish.
*****
Karen and Geoff had come to sit with the boys. They were sitting in silence, apart from sniffles and sobs.
Karen had made them all dinner, though not much was eaten. They were all too worried to think about filling their stomachs.
"Why haven't they phoned yet Nan? It's gonna be bad news isn't it?" Louis said, tears streaming down his face.
Karen pulled him closer to her. "Louis love, don't think like that. I'm sure they'll call soon. Just try not to think the worst." She comforted him.
Niall was sat the other side of Karen. He hadn't spoken since the ambulance left.
Zayn was hugging Geoff. " He can't die." Was all he could say.
"He's a little fighter." Geoff said.
*****
Three hours had passed, when Karen's phone rang. It made everyone jump as she leapt forward to pick it up off the coffee table. She saw Liam's name flash up, and with shaky hands she answered the call.
"Hello Liam...."
Cliffhanger!!!
Any guesses as to what's going to happen?
Is Harry dead or alive?
I'll write the next part later.
I'm wondering how much more to write on this story. Not sure if to carry on at this time, or do a jump of a few years. Argh!
I do have an idea for a sequel though...ooooh!
Have a good day
All the love XXX
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Fanfiction8 year old Harry has been neglected and beaten by his parents. With his parents in prison, it's down to his foster family, the Payne's to teach him that his life can be good. 1st part in a trilogy. Please read scared to be lonely and then shattered...
