The deaths in sunny hill theme park

Chapter 2 (the start of deaths

Hey guys chapter 2, this is when the tension start read on to find out what happens.

"Mum, do we have to go on the water slide, I don't want to get wet before I go on the roller coaster of death!" I whined, and pouted

She stood there for a minute then sighed I at me.

"Ok, this is what's going to happen we go on that scary roller coaster you've been going on about" she said

"It's called the roller coaster of death!" I say correcting her

She looks at me and chuckles.

"Ok whatever then we are going on a water slide" she says to me sounding serious.

We walked to the roller coaster of death and lined up,

"OMG, I can't wait any longer!" I say nearly dying because we were lining up so long.

"We will be there in 5 minutes" my mum says getting angry and her inpatient

5 minutes later.

"Yes we are finally on!" I say very happy.

I get on and push the handle down but I noticed everyone's bar clicked twice but mine only clicked once, I starting panicking.

"Ermm excuse me, my bar clicked once not twice!" I say to one of the people working here.

"It's alright you might not of heard it twice" he says, not even worrying.

I take what he says and the roller coaster starts we get to the top of the drop when my bar opened and when we went down the drop I flew out of the cart.

"HELP ME! PLEASE!" I shout at the top of my voice

It was really high and when I hit the ground I felt a sharp pain like a hundred knifes undid me and then everything went black.....

Mums POV!!!

I was worrying because Thomas said his bar clicked once when it was supposed to click twice! oh god

When we were at the top I heard a bar open

I turned around and Thomas was gone the. I heard a faint shout

"HELP ME! PLEASE" I heard someone shout, I look down and Thomas is on the ground !DEAD! With blood everwhere.

"NOOOO!" I shout, why is this happening.

I cry and when the ride Is over I get off and run to a person who works her and grab his hand..

"HELP MY SON HE FELL OFF" I shout at him ragging the end if his shirt...

He immediately picked me up and carryed me to the theme park office.

When we got there he told the manager what I said and immediately asked for medices, ambulances and police.

He put me down and asked me where he fell, I walked over there not really looking and when I told him I stood away enough so I couldn't see Thomas.

I built up my courage and walked closer until I saw him

I was the worst nightmare I was ever in, he was layed down with blood everywhere and one of his arms had snapped and was maybe a few meters away from his body. I immediately started screaming and crying

I WAS THE WORST NIGHTMARE EVER......

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Ok that was chapter 2 if there's any mistakes or any ideas for the rest of the story then plz just tell me ideas..

Anyway I'm going to be doing writer of the week every week and this week the writer if the week is.....

Cvrvmvrie there u go I love your book kidnapped and awake or woken... lova ya and I'll tell u next week who will be the writer of the week ...