One Day, I was riding my bike to school when suddenly a drunken idiot was driving and crashed into me. I bumped my head so hard that I fell into a deep sleep. The whole neighborhood saw what happened and brought me to the hospital where they tought I was dead. Then I woke up in a different world one where I always dreamed of, in a perfect world.
Alyanna: Ughh!!! where am I ?
?: Welcome my beloved. ^w^
Alyanna: * turns around*
OMG :D... uhmmm who are you again :P
Jolo: I'm Jolo Esteban
Alyanna: Your hot
Jolo: wut O_O
Alyanna: Eh. Nothing nevermind dat I'm just dizzy, maybe, no, I dunno.
Jolo: uhmmm ok. (She's sooo pretty).
Alyanna: Why am I here again???
Jolo: Because you got into a coma for almost 2 months coz of some drunken idiot who bumped you with his car. °U°
Alyanna: Oh ok... when I woke up why did you call me beloved?
(wow he kinda looks familar).
Jolo: Oh that's because I'm courting you including other guys, whom you've probtaly forgoten about due to your coma or whatever.
Alyanna: Woah straight answer. So where are the other guys courting me... uhmmm and who are they.
Jolo: *growls* grrrrr (I wanna keep her all to myself). Eh I don't know where they are... maybe they lost interest in you *smiles secretly*
?: Oi Alyanna!!! Who the heck is this guy.
Alyanna: Oh uhmmm him, why don't you ask him yourself.And who are you again. Sorry * smiles apologetically* ahehe * rubs back of her head*
Jolo: *turns around* ... *gasp* heyy Pao!!!!
How's it going
Pao: Oh hey Jolo I'm good. Anyways *turns to Alyanna* I'm Paolo Ferrer... or Pao. I'm courting you, don't you remember?
Jolo: WHAT!!! YOU'RE COURTING HER * points at Alyanna*
Pao: Yeah what's the matter with that?
Jolo: No I'M courting her
Alyanna: uhmmmm guys
Pao: Well then what a coincidence.
Jolo: Hey I'm the one who got here first
Pao: No I've been here since 5:00 in the morning.
Alyanna: GUUYYYSSSS.
Jolo and Pao: Huh?
Alyanna: People are looking at you and we really need to get out of the hosital NOW.
Pao: Ok anything for you my lady.
Jolo: *runs to the door and holds it for Alyanna*
Ladies first beloved
Alyanna: (wow they really want me so bad)
And so Alyanna, Pao, and Jolo ended up walking home together... turns out they are neighbors.
So the two boys bid Alyanna farewell and kissed her on the cheeks.
Then Alyanna went to bed happily.
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The Right Man
FanfictionAlyanna Rule, a 16 year old girl who is being corted by men. Unaware of her charm she gets into a coma for a long time... When she wakes up she remembers nothing and ends up in a different place Now its up to the men (courting her) to make her reme...
