Rewrite.

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Sooo, I've decided to rewrite (or is it retype) this because i hate how this story is made. I'm sorry but i hate this story. I don't hate any of the readers! I just hate ophow i made the plot and all that.

Problems i have with my own story,

Gaea shouldn't of had the strength to go into meaningless dreams.

I'm sorry but i just feel like that's a flaw.

It's considered "cliche" to have the main character as a sister of Percy.

I dislike that cliche now but i didn't know of it when i started this story. I only thought of myself as Silv when i started but i soon realized i was forcing myself to write this in the way past me set this out to be.

I hated forcing myself to fit the writing into what the chapter titles states in the Contents chapter.

I hated how i was changing up the story in my mind to fit what everyone expects (if they had read the Contents). The chapter titles themselves were stupid and revealed too much. I would much rather like my chapter to be the way I want it to be, and i want them to be suspending and leaving people on the tips of their toes. That's the way I've been reading stories recently.

I hated how the beginning starts. How my character is seen jumping out the window JUST to avoid a stupid, smelly, step-father. Seems rather idiotic. I understand now why a Amino didn't approve of my character and decide to hide my account on there.

When i rewrite this story. I'll be changing my character. Her name won't be Silv Jackson. Because she wouldn't of been adopted by Sally. She would instead been living with her grandma because her father is dead by being killed while being in the army and her mother abandoned her because she was disappointed.

I will not reveal who her parents are. It'll be surprising. I'll also change her appearance too. You'll see in the rewrite.

I acutally will plan the story out in Google Drive BEFORE i write it. I hope y'all will respect my decision.

I'm also changing her name to Isabella Mili. I like her nane and the name "Isabella" is actually pretty nice. I also like the lastname "Mili", even if i made it up on the spot. Wait-does it have a meaning. *searches up*

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Welp, apparently it can be used in Indian language. And I'm part-indian... HOW DID THAT COINCIDENCE HAPPEN.

It says that it's meaning is "who is like me". I-i did not know.

Welp.

See y'all at the rewrite when i make it?

*shrug*

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