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Take What's Left Of Me (BoyxBoy) {Twilight Fanfiction} [On Hold Indefinitely] (editing)

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Nykolous Grey is a special vampire who has caught the eye of both Edward Cullen and the Volturi. He's different from other vampires, insanely different. He's an entirely new vampire species and that has caught the Volturi's interests, as well as be...

#edward-cullen #gay #own-twist #special #vampire #vampire-boyxboy

!!A VERY Important Notice!!

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by Is_That_Batman

by Is_That_Batman

To the like five people who have actively read all four GLORIOUS chapters of this story, I am here to inform you that there's going to be a rewrite. Editing. Adjustments. Fuckery.

Literally, anything can happen in this editing/rewrite mess of an agenda of mine.

I like the idea of this story... but the execution of it so far—in my opinion—is so beyond poor it pains my soul. I started this story when I was like thirteen, I think.

I'm twenty now. I am a not-so-certified adult. My writing skills and storytelling have matured in the last seven years (even if I have not), and I'd like to reflect that and write a better version of this story. With actual plot and character development (to the best of my minuscule ability) and just shit that makes a lot more sense.

So, what does this all mean for the story? It means this:

1. Point of view is going to change. I like writing in the third person, and I feel like this story can definitely benefit from the third person. Especially because I have plans for my boi Edward Cullen, AKA Mr I-was-born-in-1901.

2. Pacing is going to be slower. Because DAMN did shit happen so fast in the first FOUR chapters. Thirteen-year-old me had no concept of pace and build-up. Hell, twenty-year-old me barely has an idea of it.

3. I'm starting from scratch. Meaning I will be creating an entirely new "book" for this. The editing/rewrite will not be done in this... section? book? mess? After this, there will be no more updates on THIS one. I'll be creating a new book of the same name because... it's still essentially the same story.

4. Some of the 1000 points of information I so terribly crammed into four chapters will be changed, dragged out, or ditched in the new version of this story.

Sorry for getting your hopes up if you thought this was a legit story update lol. I'll keep this version up until I've gotten past the first five chapters of the new version I'm planning, but after that, I'll be deleting this one.

Thanks for enjoying the mess of a story I wrote when I was thirteen. It really does mean a lot :)