Palindrome Senryu - Miser Alive vs. Miser Ghost

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Miser Alive

It sees nothing when

All need hands- his, but alive,

Not when dwelling soul.

Miser Ghost

Soul dwelling when not

Alive, but his hands- need all,

When nothing sees it.

Author's note: Yeah, preety much the same, the dead and the living miser. Hope y'all like it :)

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