That Night (Original)

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There he was... in his navy blue suit, red hair and shiney emerald eyes. The name was Preston.. just looking from afar, you could easily tell what's about to go down... Date night (looky looky!) and here she is dressed in her sparkly blue dress that she probably bought in less than 24 hours ago.

Standing up straight Preston greeted his new date with a charming smile
"Ah, why hello there", she smiled as he opened the door for her
They both entered, closing the door, and leaving the quiet night to itself.
Finishing up their conversations and plates, both got ready to leave. Preston, being the gentle man he is, payed for it all and left a 150$ tip.
They both step out in the once again quiet night.
"Can we do this again sometime" she requested putting her hand on his
"Sure, why not?" Preston smiled at her as he began walking to his car. "Uhm" she hesitated to say something as she stepped closer to him
"May I come with you?"
"Hm?" Preston stopped and looked at her
She fiddled with her bracelet while explaining "I kinda came hereby uber"
"Haha wow" Preston replied sarcastically. "I know"
She laughed.
"Yeah, you can ride with me" Preston agreed unlocking his car door for her
Sitting down, Preston quickly asked "Soo, where are we going?"
"I live on fallstreet by the bank" she said closing the door, buckling her seat down.
"Ooo, you live in that fancy street" Preston remarked turning on the car.
"Oh hush, it barely has anything considered middle class" She exaggerated
"I've never seen a 4 story house under middle class"
Preston sarcastically said
"That House doesn't count because it's the land lord's"
"We are already here?" She asked getting out.
"Yeah I was busy driving while you were talking.
She laughed taking out her bag and flipping her hair to the side,
"Anyways cya later." Preston said about to start the car.
"Already leaving?" She asked
"Yeah" Preston said putting on his seat belt
"I was hoping you could stay a few minutes" she said in a very tempting tone
"Well... just a lil' while..." Preston replied getting out
She smirked and walked over to her door, getting out her keys and unlocking it.
They both entered as she put down her bag and taking out some pins from her hair.
"You can sit down if you want, want something to drink?"
"Sure" Preston said sitting down and looking at her as she opened the fridge.
"Want some water or whine" she asked
"Ah, whine? You think I should drink that this late?"
"Only if you want" she said smiling
"I'll have some..." he said getting up
"Ha, you sure?" She said, getting it out.
"Well you did suggest it." Preston said walking up to her. She got out a glass and poured some, giving it to him
"Ah, thank you" he hesitated to drink it, than took a sip
Preston coughed putting the glass down
"That's strong, wow"
She laughed, "Not used to it?"
"First time actaully." Preston said looking at her
"Wow, you've bee missin' out"
he shook his head, "Nah"
She giggled, "your funny"
"Hey I'll be right back I need to pee" she said quickly walking into another room
"Mmmh." Preston mumbled looking around.
He began coughing some more, shaking his head and clearing his throat

Sometime later she returned
"Hey" she greeted returning in pajamies
"That's what took you so long"
"Yes" she nodded, walking towards him
He turned a little red as she kissed him
"Thank you for dinner." She blushed
"Ah, it was nothing." Preston smiled
"It was! I wanna pay you back." She agrued
"How will you pay back the 530$ I spent?" He asked
"Who said I have to pay you back in money?" She smiled unbutting his shirt slowly
"Ah, your naughty" he said kissing her lips
"Wanna go in my room?" before he could answer she already grabbed his hand and led him in there
"Heh"
She got on the bed as he closed the door, locking it.
She bit her lip smiling about what was gonna happen next.
Preston got on the with her and kissed her lips.
She blushed as Preston kissed her neck.
"Are you going to give me a hickey?"
"More than that"
"Ooo like-" she got cut off as Preston started biting down
"What are you doing?!" Those were her last words as the rest turned to screaming.
Preston kept biting down into her neck until it killed her. Her body turned limp as he let go and slowly let her body lie on the bed.
"Ah, now I can stop acting" preston laughed gaging back up the whine
"You disgusting human food is too much for me"
His eyes turned white as his mouth grew bigger
"Did you even think you'd get to second base?"
Preston inhaled her corpse.
Preston licked his lips, proud of his work
"She tasted a lot better than she looked..."..

(If you read this far, trust me it hurt me way more to type this out than it did you reading it. I included everything from the misspelled words to the horrible grammar. Oh but I had to leave out the random ass capital letters it was too much. Now I'm just dying to rewrite this, theres so many ways that I could brighten up the story while still having the same ending. Trust me chapter two will be wayyy better and different.)

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