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Today is the day I'm going to make a change in my life. Its the first day of my freshman year at a totally different school and a different state. My name is Becky, and my passion in life is photography, singing, my family. Ever since i was seven my mom and i have been alone. My father left us for some younger chick named Jessica. Its never like in other divorces though, because my mom and i, we are living in paradise without him. He was an abusive junkie, he would come home drunk as a dog and hit us or try and drown us in the small tub we had in our old house. She tried for so long to get rid of the old fart but he just wouldn't leave, claimed he loved her and was gonna get better. Yeah that happened the day i walked out my back yard to a giant pig with wings, playing a ukulele, and singing to me. he finally left after my mom filed divorce papers. this is what happened, one night when he came home smashed, she looked him in the eye and told him to get out and when he said no she handed him a pile of divorce papers and two restraining orders (one for her and one for me). She refused to stay married to a man like him and he stormed out the house, bringing back boxes and a woman about five years younger than him. We were finally happy, the bruises were healing, and the cuts fading away. Of course we weren't well off at first but now we're pretty good. it took awhile for my mom to find a job, but she did it and has finally made her dream come true. She's the manager at a hair salon and has been ever since i was eight, everyone loves her. Now we are moving to the grate state of Florida.
