Story Drafts

Draft 1 (Not finished..)

Kiara and Kami's Adventures Part 1: It All Starts with a Dream (Draft?)

A book opened up to show a picture of a woman with neon white hair, flowing in the wind, wearing a suit of armor, and weilded a sword. A narrator started to speak with her calm, and child-like voice.

"Millions of years ago, back when the universes were filled with pure darkness, a strong warrior traveled from galaxy to galaxy and planet to planet, slaying evil creatures and plants as she went. She would clear each planet from creatures before going to the next, leaving a trail of light and hope..."

The narrator continues in a calm matter, "One day, she stopped on a lifeless planet that had no food, no water, nor a single living thing in sight. Just a giant rock. The warrior, due to the small amount of magic she had left, wanted to rest on this lifeless planet with comfort. So, with the little magic she had left, she first touched the ground, causing grass and water to spawn from below. Then, she waved her hand to spawn trees, galactic animals, bushes filled with berries, and crops to keep her from starving."

Another voice, gentle and yet childish as well, adds in for the narrator." As time went by, she looked around her surroundings, she felt like something was missing. She had an environment comfortable and suitable to her liking, she had food and water, but she didn't have any friends, or people to follow her beliefs of making the universes better homes for everyone. So she raised her hand in front of her, and spawned a portal, causing immigrants, slaves, and poor people to walk through, with no place to call home.

The people that came through the portal saw the warrior and had so many questions. Questions like, 'Where are we?', 'What is this place?', 'Who are you?', and 'What are we doing here?'."

"The warrior, as calmly and fast as she could, answer their questions. She said that her name was Galactia Enchantix, warrior of life and protector of these worlds. She explained that the people are now in a safe planet, where they wouldn't have to worry about being poor or enslaved. She claimed that he very planet that they are standing on would soon be their new home.

The people smiled with it, thinking it be great home, but then they turned back to puzzled faces. 'What are we going to name this new home?' One of them asked. Another came to the front and thought it would be nice to name this planet after Galactia, in the honor of what she did to give the people a new home and removed them from their problems back in their worlds. Galactia thought it would be the people's choice to decide, but she said, 'You can name this after me if that's what you wish...' The people started to smile brighter then before and agreed to the idea."

"And from that day on, Galactia became their new ruler, teaching them how to use magic like she does. She also helped make the people's houses with other men, helped harvest the crops, made new laws to help the people, and started to make a great empire that would later on bring peace to the planet and everything that is watched over by the queen. It would be a beacon of hope for both Galactians and demons...." The book closes, showing the scenery of a Daycare, with kids in front of view.

"That's the whole story." I, the one holding the closed book said in calm, happy tone while my sister, Kami, sat beside me on the ground, with a joyful smile. A kid in the front of the group asked, "What happened after that, Miss Kiara?"

"Well, the new queen created a group of children to raise as her own and to pass down her abilities. They were to look after simple tasks as well as big duties to do every day. This included rising and setting the Sun and the Moon, Keeping time in motion, looking after the living and the people above, and the making sure the stars shine bright in the evening, little ones. They were the new heirs to the throne, for once Galactia decided to move on, or give up the crown, that is."