Reality check

Chapter 5

She started to look around more and found the "Cleveland Ohio vault" she went in. There was a man crying on the ground looking at a photo of his family. "hello?" she said "HELLO" he cried "what happens?" she asked ". "my family thay died" "THAY CAN STILL BE ALIVE" she chanted. " I don't think so" he said. "what's your name?" asked Madison "Jeremy" he cried "well Jeremy it's going to be fine did your family come to the vault with you" she asked "yes," he said. Madison walked closer to him to hug him "its fine Jeremy we will find them" she said in a comforting voice. Then all of sudden she heard a gun shot she looked back at Jeremy he has gotten shot "please find my family and tell them what happened" Jeremy wished "i will... I WILL" she said Jeremy fell on the ground still living. "WHO ARE YOU" Madison screamed "You killed him bich" he said in a angry way "He tried to kill me you asshole" she shoots him expecting him to die  "you fucker" she said he fell in pain  she picked up jermey and went back to her house.