Story: 'Zane~Chan in Starlight'
Title of Chapter: "Why are YOU here?!!?"
Why is it bad?: Cringeworthy/poor grammar
Note: I could put every chapter of this fanfiction in this, but I thought that this was the worst one of all.
Damien's here and thinks it's okay for him to talk to me "W-why are y-you here?" I ask "Me & my friends are here on a vacation" he replies, I squeeze Zane's hand as I'm holding it "We should hangout sometime and catch up!" he continued he grabbed my other hand I was using to hold on to he railing "Come on!" he demanded, I squeezed Zane's hand "Don't make her go anywhere she doesn't want to, Damien!" Zane said gritting his teeth "And what are you gonna do about it, Zane, Emo boy, it's not like she cares about YOU" Damien said yanking my arm, I then turned around and kissed Zane "K-Kawaii~Chan?!" Damien exclaimed he pulled on my arm and tried to kiss me but before I could do anything Zane punched him in the mouth "And don't mess with her AGAIN" I hugged Zane "Thank you" I said tearing up then we ran to the boat. I walked to my room and laid down everyone was downstairs except me but then Zane came in and he laid down I looked over at him and said "Thank you, again" then we started kissing and then Zane said "you're welcome." he wrapped his arms around my waist and started kissing my neck "hehe" I laughed "that tickles" I said laughing, he laughed and pulled me closer to him and whispered in my ear "I love you" I blushed and we started kissing again.
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