Fifty Shades of Elizabeth (Working Title)

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 This story will be a little bit steamy at parts, it is a partial fan fiction to the Fifty Shades of Gray trilogy and I think this can be an amazing book that I write ! Hope you like it :)

I stood there admiring him from across the room; he was a handsome young man with a dark brooding figure and light hazel eyes. His black hair was parted back slightly over his eyes just enough to cover his left eye. One hair flip from him would make me melt right away, I was sure of it. I'm getting a little ahead of myself; I should start from the beginning to enlighten you on my sexy situation. 

It all started on a sunny Saturday morning in October, I was lounging around my room trying to find something to do to kill my boredom. I had just got off my grounding that day and I was finally allowed to do something.I just didn't know what to do first. Looking into my mirror I admired myself, for a sixteen year old, I thought I looked great. I had long blonde hair that went past my shoulders and deep light blue eyes. 

As I was admiring myself in my mirror my mother yelled down to me from the living room. Rushing downstairs to see what she wanted me nearly fell down my narrow stairs, muttering under my breath to watch out next time I reached the bottom. 

"Elizabeth, I'm going out to run some errands and I want you to come with me." I smiled at what she said because for the first time in three weeks I was allowed outside. Grabbing my coat and some shoes I quickly looked at myself in the mirror again and realized I looked fabulous.

Looking over my shoulder I saw that my mother was ready to, so I opened the door to out Victorian house and walked outside. Instantly the crisp fall air hit my face and I embraced it instantly. 

Ever since I was a kid I loved the cold weather that autumn and fall brought. Walking over to my mother’s mustang I opened the door and got inside of the car. Looking out the window I noticed that the leaves from the trees were finally falling. October was in full swing I thought to myself and smiled. 

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My mother’s first stop was at the local grocery store Shoppers Drug Mart. It was a rather large store with a lot to see in it. Closing the car door I followed my mother into the store and started to look around as she picked up the things she needed. Walking over to the book section, I started looking at the new paperbacks that were in.

None of them were particular interest to me, the only kind of stories I read were Erotic stories. The last one I read was the Fifty Shades of Gray trilogy; they were truly amazing book, like nothing I have ever read before. There was never going to be another series like that, I knew it.

Walking back over to my mother I noticed that she was basically done. Helping her to the cash register I placed the stuff on the convert belt. The cashier quickly swiped each item and put them in a bag for us. My mother handed him the cash and he bagged the items for us. Swiftly picking them up with my right hand we were on our way out. 

"Where are we going next?" I asked quickly as we were unloading the stuff into the trunk of the car. 

"I have to go to the doctors for my annual checkup." "I'll only be about an hour or so." I shook my head knowing perfectly well that I would have to sit in the waiting office for an hour until she was done.

Thinking to myself I thought, thank God I brought my phone or else this would have been unbearable. I started to text my best friend Jessica to tell her I was off my grounding and I would be home shortly to party with her. 

Once we arrived at the doctor’s office I walked inside expecting just to sit there on my phone with nothing to do except being bored. I was completely wrong though, because of my mother’s doctor appointment, I not only met the hottest guy alive but I found out he was also interested in me. There were a few problems with it. 

One, He was my mother’s doctor 

Two, He was much older than me.

Despite these two problems, I knew we would overcome these obstacles. 

As we both sat waiting for the doctor, I immersed myself into my phone. Rapidly texting anyone who I knew would reply right away.

All of a sudden during mid-text, the door opened and there stood possibly the hottest and sexiest man I have ever seen. He was just so perfect with his clip-board in his hand and his white jacket. He spoke in a deep and husky voice, 

"Hello, Mrs. Harper, right this way." As he motioned my mother into his office I couldn't help but gawk at how sexy he was, he was truly the perfect man. My mother got up and went into his office; I felt a pang of jealousy all of a sudden. My mother was going into his office with him alone; well I just sit out here. 

I quickly shot off a quick text to Jessica telling her what had just happened. Closing my phone, I decided to take a little nap well my mother was inside with mister perfect...

A/N: First story I have written like this, I hope you enjoy it. 

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