Lost In The Woods

The first race

So my owner Paul has let me and my buddies out to go run a deer I smell it and so do all of the other dogs around me. I start barking and running... I'm trying to keep up with everyone but they are to fast. I can still smell the deer and I can't give up... So I keep running and running and running until I get caught into a bunch a bruyers. Then I hit a road and looky there my owner Paul is right there along with his daughters Ruby and Abby. I'm so releved to be picked up and put in the dog box. My feet hurt and I'm bleeding a little in some places from all the bruyers. When I get put in the box two of the other dogs are there too.. Soon all of my buddies have been caught. Abby comes and puts a bowl of water in the dog box and it sure feels good to have some water after that run. It has rained a lot in the club so theres a bunch of mud holes in stuff in the dirt roads. It is also very cold when Paul starts driving. Then Paul starts to try to drive through a mud hole but it doesn't work and he gets us stuck. There's mud everywhere on the truck the dog box and even on me. It feels like hours until we get pulled out by one of Paul's buddies. After that we drive around a bit then the truck stops and I hear someone one on top of the dog box.... BOOM! whoa what was that!  I hear them shouting yeah, nice one and so on. I have no idea what's going on so I ask my buddie that's in the box with me, Hartley and she says...    

Authors note:
Hey guys if you like this first chapter plz leave a comment it will get even more exiting and intresting. Hope you guys like it and plz give me tips. This is my first ever book