the grudge-part 1

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Realtor= bold R
Marlin=regular M
Stacy(little sister)=S
Stanford(dad)=D

R: Right this way, (he says walking into the house, dad following behind)
D: What did you say about the owners?
R: He said they didn't tell ant to stay in the house after his wife and daughter died a tragic death
M: in the house? She asked in question (following her dad and little sister in the house)
R: According to the owner....yes

The third-person point of view

Marlin felt uneasy as she walked in. She isn't the type to believe in ghosts and spirits, so she just ignored it.
S: I wonder which room is the biggest( she said running up the dusty stairs )
M: wait I should get to pick the biggest room ..IM The oldest ( she said running upstairs after her sister)
D: be careful girls ( he yelled upstairs)
R: Have you made your decision yet sir
D:yes I'll take it

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