"#Omg gurl. #amaze!" carley giggled swiping her iphone on. her best friends, laurie, tabby, and madison sat on the chairs next to her. As she reached over she accidently knocked oer all the drinks. #fail. "#Omg. #fail!"
madison lol'ed. "seriously u? #morelikeepicfail"
AND CUT!
1.) How the fuck can someone "lol'ed."?!
2.) And this is going to come as a shock- but guess what, girly? YOU DON'T NEED TO PUT '#' IN FRONT OF EVERY DANG WORD YOU SAY. It's okay every once and awhile, but seriously? e.e #lame!
3.) The grammar. Ever heard of capitalization- or spelling on that note? "u" doesn't work for everything you guys.
4.) THIS ISN'T YOUR PHONE- DON'T TEXT TALK. ._. Seriously, bro. I've read to many books that say "u" instead of "you".
