Hall Of Secrets[ON HOLD]

Hall Of Secrets -Nothings Safe In Rosewood Part 1

This is my first ever story, and im not sure whether to keep writing it or start a different story, all critisism welcome, and anyone with tips it would be greatly appreciated , thanks Aimee

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I woke up screaming feeling like i'd just ran a marathon, but i hadn't i'd just had another bad dream, the same dream i have everynight, everytime i close my eyes,

 I see them i see their faces their hair surrounding them floating above their heads as they sink further into the murky abyss, no-one was meant to die, i didn't even want anyone to get hurt, i was trying to make things better not worse , but no-one understands that, they all think it was me that i killed them they just don't get it,

 Ms. Fitzpatrick is the worst she is supposed to guide me to counsel me and help me sort out my life to tell me its ok ... but she doesn't she just lets me know that it was all my fault that i'm the reason my parents got locked in the car and i escaped she tells me that i killed them that it was me.

  I never get any visitors even Jasper doesn't  visit me i think he believes i meant to do it to.                                                                             

  ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------Flashback-------------------------------------I sighed in relief for the first time in 7 months I had talked to my mum, she said she was sorry for sending me away and that she wished she'd never done it ,she also said that we should all get together just Dad, Mum & I for dinner at the three palms because that was the place were everything went wrong ,were they told me that i was going away to a strict english boarding school in England and mom said that was exactly were she wanted to make it right so in 4 days on monday the 14 of february for my 16th Birthday  , mum even said i could pick them up and drive them there.

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Everyday I go through the same routine wake up at 4.00 an hour before the morning bell screaming, then i wake up Aleysha my roomate who has learnt to live with my screaming then we both put on our white jumpsuits and go to the cafeteria for breakfast ,porridge how exciting... I then have my daily session with Ms.Fitzpatrick and when thats finally over i spend the reast of the day in the gardens , being in them reminds me of being at home, I mean if it wasn't surrounded by a 10 foot iron fence, covered in rows and rows of barbed wire..but thats not the worst part.....it's electrified, 14 months i've been here in Chibice Detention Centre For Young ladies and after a year in this place you learn to live with anything and everything i mean it isn't like your given a choice  you have to, sometimes the people who come to this place truly are crazy, im supposed to get out of here in a month and a half in 45 days, Aleysha still has 4 months in this wretched place, she's been here for 2 years and 3 months for starting a fire that killed a someone she always tells me she didn't mean it but i'm not so sure