Forced into engagement with my mate

Chapter One

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Chapter One

"Please! No more! I can't stand any longer!" I screamed as I all but whispered to my best friend. "Taylor, if you give me another dress to try on I'm going to kill you, and then ill have to kill my own twin because he's so heartbroken cause he lost you" I tried to threaten, doing no good and only a outburst of laughter to come from her and a chuckle from Michael.

"Oh calm down sis, she has to make her wedding perfect or she'll go crazy." Michael said. Taylor gasped and slapped his arm, "I will not! It doesn't have to be perfect and I won't go electric-chair-crazy, just a mild hug-yourself-jacket-crazy."
"I think she already is 'hug-yourself-jacket-crazy' if not already worked herself up the electric-chair-crazy" I mind-linked to my brother, hardly able to control a serious tone. Mick chuckled and replied, "I'll call the asylum and you get the nurse" his cockiness dripped from every word. After he winked at me, he pulled out his phone and fake dialed a number.

"Ah yes, I need a padded room and a jacket for Miss Taylor Rain. Uh huh, yeah, we are at the mall but i can have her there in meh maybe about 25 minutes, ok, uh huh thank you, have a good day, ok bye see you soon." Acting as though he hung up he put the phone back in his pocket, put on a serious face and stares at Tay. "Well babe, they have the room and the jacket, just not the patient. We should get you there before they occupy your room with someone else."
Taylor had the deer-stuck-in-headlights-look, her mouth hung agape and her eyes looked terrified. It took all I could not to laugh and cause those people to actually reserve the room for me. Taylor stuttered, "D...di...did you seriously ju...just d...do that?" Michael nodded and frowned, "I'll miss you baby girl. But, I promise ill come see you every weekend until they let you out." "How co...could yo...you do that and no...not think I wouldn't mind link into the conversation? I am not falling for that trick again, I may be a blonde but I'm not that stupid. Well maybe a little but not too much." She beamed a white smile that would have most guys falling to their knees.
Taylor was beautiful and Michael was lucky to have her as a mate. She has shoulder length blonde wavy hair and deep brown eyes, she also had a amazing body from working out 3 days a week, complimenting her creamy skin and 5'9 height. She was to become Luna of our pack, The Shadow Pack in 5 months when Mick turned 18 years of age.
Right now we were choosing the dresses the bridesmaids were to wear for their wedding in 5 weeks, and I was the baby doll they were testing it on. I was so tired! I think I've tried on at least 50 dresses in the 3 hours we have been here. There has been purples, reds, pinks, greens, one was even black. Breaking my thoughts on how tired I was, Taylor held out one last dress, " Ok, ok, we need to focus. Rachel this is the last dress and if I don't like it, you don't have to try on anymore. But I have a strong feeling this could be the dress for the maid of honor." Excitement bubbled through me since this was the last dress I had to put on, snatching the dress and running back to the dressing rooms in undid the wrapping protecting the dress.
A strapless dress with a pale blue top cut off by a black sash finished with a white and black pattern, lie beneath the blue protective barrier. The dress was more casual then formal, but I put it on anyways and pranced into the viewing room where Taylor and Michael waited.
Taylor gasped and Michael smiled at the sight. "I knew it! This is the dress I want them to wear! Omg, you look incredible in it, Rach!" Taylor said proudly. I stepped on the platform and looked in the wall length mirror. Taylor was right, I looked amazing. My hair was straight and fell into its natural curls at the end, my hazel eyes seemed to pop more than normal, and my long tan legs looked endless. I was surprised. The lady who was selling the dress sighed a sigh of relief since this means we would finally be leaving. I knew she was human from her smell, so she didn't know how important this was for Tay, but I think she may have been overdoing it with having me try on 50 dresses just for the 'perfect dress'.
The woman I believe her name was Mary asked, "Are you sure this is the dress?" Taylor nodded quickly. Mary looked at me and motioned me back to the changing rooms and started discussing some things with them. I pulled the dress off and wondered what it would be like to find your mate and get married to them. It was proudly amazing by the way they acted around each other and how in love they seem to be.
Shaking the thought from my mind, I put the dress back on the hanger, hung it in the protective case, and walked to them waiting at the cash register so they could pay. I handed them to the dress and ran out into my car and drove off without any questions or anything. I was too tired to talk and I just wanted to go home and get married to my bed so I can stay with it forever and make it my mate.
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Yeah, so it wasn't the best, I know. But it will get better i promise. Sorry for any spelling errors, I tried to narrow those down a bit. Anyway, so I'm really tired, so if any of you liked this or want me to continue writing this please please please tell me in the comments or by voting. Also, I need a cover photo cause the one right now sucks but it's the best I had so sorry about that.
For the ones who continued to read and took the time to comment, thank you so much!
-Jessica :p