Space your writing out.
Like this:
Keith was sitting on the couch. He was waiting patiently for his boyfriend Lance to come home from work.
When he finally arrived home. Keith walked up to Lance and kissed him softly on the cheek.
Lance smiled and kissed Keith back. He always enjoyed his kisses. "I missed you babe work was tiring."
Also use capital letters. And try and use grammar as best as you can.
Make it interesting. People won't read your stories if you write.
She kissed his lips roughly.
"Babe let's go make out like tight now"
"Omg your so right tehe"
NO JUST NO.
By the way I am not trying to offend anyone. Or force anyone to do anything. I'm just giving tips. I am trying to help. If you decide not to listen that's fine.
