Hi! I'd like to apologize in advance. I don't know why, but that's the kind of person I am. This is the first story that I have "published" and have let other people read. I normally write on my own once I get a creative idea on google docs. Those stories are for my eyes only. I don't really know what to expect when it comes to your opinions about the story, and I'm open to feedback.
This story is a bit of a challenge for me. You see, it's written in first person, from the perspective of Bea. Bea is blind. I don't want to offend anyone because I'm not blind. This is from my imagination, and I don't want to outrage anyone.
Also, because the main character is blind, it's harder to describe things around them. I always play out stories in my head, visually, as I read along. Not being able to describe as much is a challenge, so I've added "aesthetics" to the end of each chapter. These will be collages to help the reader visualize a character or the feeling met in that chapter.
Thank you for your time and for giving this story a chance. I hope it's not a total bust.
-Ripley
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In the Dark
General FictionBea has lived quite an... interesting life. With losing her mother after two years of losing her sight, Bea imagines that the universe is done testing her. After a fatal car crash, however, Bea doesn't remember thinking such a thing. Or anything at...
