The Past

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A/N: So, I had an idea for this story, but I changed it a little, cause I couldn't get past the first three pages with the original concept.

Well, this story is for Mimi, so the first dedication goes to her.

So, thank you for reading, and I hope you like it.

:D

Henderwhore Out <3

A pair of 12 year olds were walking together through the park. All the locals were watching them walk around the park, as they laughed at a joke just told.

"They make such a cute couple" some said.

"I bet they'll end up married when they grow up" others said.

The two just shrugged it off, knowing that they were best friends.

Once the boy had taken the girl to their special place, he pulled her over to the bench.

He had something he wanted to try, to see what would happen.

"Hey, Mimi?" he said, getting the girls attention. 

"Yeah Carlos?" she said, looking up at him. Her best friend, who first drew her in with his chocolate brown eyes, which hypnotised her.

"Well, you know how you were saying about your first kiss?"

"Yeah" she said, nodding. She told him she wanted it to be with her first crush, but didn't tell him that he was her first crush.

"Well, what about if you had it with me instead?" he said nervously. He really liked her, but she was his best friend in the whole wide world.

What if she doesn't like him like that?

"Em, okay" she said, shaking a little. She was going to kiss him.

She looked up, and he started to lean in a little. She leaned in too, and then his lips were on hers. It was a sweet little kiss, but it had electricity surging through the both of them.  

Once they parted, Carlos had a look of triumph, while Mimi sat there, shyly looking at the ground.

All she could think about was how amazing that kiss was, and how she never wanted to forget it.

Ever.

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"Mimi, please, will you just get in the pool?" the young boy said, as the girl stood at the edge and shivered.

"B-but it's freezing Carlos!" Mimi squealed, as the boy just stared at her. They were at Carlos's house, celebrating her 13th birthday. They'd been dating for 3 months.

"I'd advise you to do it before Anthony pushes you in" he said, while looking behind her.

"He wouldn't dare" she said with confidence, before she felt someone push her, and then she blacked out.

"Mimi? MIMI!?" Carlos yelled, before he dove down to pull her up, as she was sinking to the bottom. He pulled her up, and with Anthony's help got her out of the pool and onto the tarmac.

He started to make sure she was breathing, Which she was thankfully. He started to look and see were she banged her head, and when he touched a part of her head, she moaned in pain.

Guess she wasn't that far under, he thought, as he breathed a sigh of relief.

She wasn't dead, she was just unconscious.

While he was making sure she was still breathing, Anthony had ran to get help.

Carlos's parents picked her up and carried her to the car, with Carlos behind them, to take to her to A&E.

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