When Women Attack [COMPLETED] (ashrald)-sarah gerald

Chapter 1 Stephen is back

[ the next day, I get up earlier to meet her atthe bus I was all excited!!! But I don't why I'm like that, maybe b/c she's different from girls in my class... thoses girl were all putting make up. When they doesn't put their make... it can even drive us to the death way... funny but it's true! A girl in my classroom Tanya, she put make up everyday 24/7. If she doens't put make up she think taht the world will end. I never dare sit, walk talk to her... I didn't want to die young b/c of her perfume. We can smell it at 100 meter far away. That's how I know when she's in the class or wherever in teh school. When turn back I saw her coming]

Louis: Jess!!

Jess: hey Louis, how are you??

Louis: fine you???

Jess: great, why are you ehre so early???

Louis: Well...*I want to meet you!!!* I need some help

Jess: About what??

Louis: mathematic

Jess: oh! [smile]

Louis: yeah..

Jess: Let's go in teh bus and i'll explain you what you don't understand!

Louis: ok

In the bus

[ Even if I ask question to her all thoses question, was everything taht I already know. I juss didn't know what to say when she ask me why I was so early. The math thing was an excuse. I juss want to see her, be next to her.]

Jess [ notcie that he wasn't listening to her but looking at her]: Is there something on my face??

Louis: no...

Jess: So why you keep staring at me??

Louis: well... I was litening to you, it's juss taht when I listen to someone I use to look at their eyes...

Jess: oh.... but it's kinda make me shy....

Louis: ok, so I won't look at your face...

Jess: thanks

Louis: no problem since you're helping me!

Jess: yeah...

[ Suddenly this popular guy was in the bus he notice me with JEss]

MArk: so like taht Louis is hanging out with that little nerd girl!

[ Mark was the most popular guy in the school everygirl was after him. The even compete to go out with him, but as the most popular guy he's a player.]

* you can choose anyone you want to make him*

Louis: I... she's my friend

MArk [start to laugh]: you friend this... nerd??? So when did you became a nerd Louis??

Suddenly someone tap his right shoulder

Mark:[remove the hand from his shoulder without looking back. But the man behind still put his hand on his shoulder] I said!!! [then MArk goes sat in silence]

Jess: Stephen!!!! When did you came back from CAnada how's dad???

Stephen: I juss came back yesturday. I call you at your home but you wasn't there so I decide to visit Hong Kong by myself!

Jess: How's dad???

Stephen: fine! Mom and him going on a trip around the world. That's why I'm back sionce I have 3 months of vacation.

Jess: great!! I'm so happy that you are back Stephen I miss you so much!!!

Stephen: Are you going at school today??

Jess: yeah!

[ I didn't heard all the conversation between but they seem really close. He's maybe her boyfriend who back from Canada. The only reason that made me thing of that is the word miss, that she said.]

Jess: Oh! I forgot!! stephen this is my friend Louis, Louis this is Stephen!

Louis: nice to meet...[ was about to shake his hand, but Stphen suddenly puthis hands around Jess waist's wich made her feel uncomfortable]uh....

stephen: hi! I'm Jess's bf

Louis:...... I go to go!! bye!!

Jess: Louis!!! We're not suppose to land now!! [tolate he was already gone]

Jess: Why did you do that???

Stephen: I juss want to know if he really loves you!!

Jess: there's nothing between us!! We're juss friend!!! [her face turn red]

Stephen: sure???

Jess: stop!!!!

Stephen hehehe

TBC

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Louis loves Jess, b/c she's different from other girl. Will he have troubles with MArk and other guy like today?? How about Stephen he already suspect Louis to loves her.

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