CreepyPasta A Fan-Made Story (until chapter 4, draft)

CreepyPasta A Fan-Made Story

Chapter One

(Jeff's POV) My name is Jeff, I'm 14 and me and my family are moving today, my brother Liu seems ok with this but I'm just not in the mood for such a thing. We pull up in front of my new home I could see people everywhere they were all looking at us knowing we were new. I then see my mum talking to this lady who had walked up to say hi to us. I pay no attention and just walk into the house, it's a fairly decent house.

 It was pretty big and had three rooms, my only complaint was the fact that we moved into a trash bin compared to our old place I mean at least we had a second floor. I pick out my room and put my luggage in it before going outside and helping everyone with the boxes. It was around 7 pm before we all sat down in the living room to eat dinner while watching TV. The movie was boring so I decided to go out for a walk, it was getting dark but I didn't mind in fact I like the dark.

 As I was walking I noticed a boy he seemed about the same age or at least one year older and he was holding a bag which a weird smell was coming from. The boy waved his hand with a warm smile on his face, I wave back awkwardly, the boy seemed to notice the face I was making when the smell reached me. The boy laughs a little before pulling out a packet of meat which seemed to be pig kidneys.

 I almost feel sick at the sight "sorry I have a taste for this stuff" the boy puts away the kidneys and smile at me. I nod before starting to walk away "you're new here right" I heard the boy say, I turn back towards him and nod. The boy sticks his hand out "I'm Jack" Jack says, I shake his hand and smile a little "I'm Jeff". The two of us decided to talk a little it turned out that Jack was a year older than me and we go to the same school. After an hour of talk and saying our goodbyes, I walk back to my new house and walk in the movie had just finished and my parents were getting ready to go to sleep Liu had already gone to sleep. My parents looked at me with a bit of an angry face "where were you young man" my dad said as I walked in, I ignored him as I walk past them and lock myself in my room. I take off my shoes and lay on my bed not bothering to change into my PJs I stare at the ceiling before slowly falling asleep.

I wake at least I think I'm awake it's midnight and I get out of my bed to get some water as I walk back into my room I look out the window and see and tall black man with no face and slender white head. I could hear my screams echoing throughout the house before I wake up breathing heavily it was 7 am in the morning. It was just a dream I thought before getting out of bed not knowing that he was still there watching me. I walk into the kitchen and grab some toast before following my brother to the bus stop to get to school. 

I and my brother sat down waiting for the bus at the bus stop, we then hear skateboards before three boys on skateboards roll up in front of us and laugh. The person in front of them laughs as he pulls out a knife "looky here guys fresh meat, now here's the drill you give us your money and no one gets hurt" the boy says to us. Liu though being older was still scared to get hurt so he gives the boy his wallet, I begin to get mad feeling my homicidal side of me come alive. 

Without thinking I punch the boy in face snatching his knife and stabbing him in the arm. I then throw the knife into the tall boy's leg and punch the smaller boy right in the stomach. I then see the bus and I knew that I was gonna get in trouble, so I and Liu began to run to school not looking back. The entire time though the man was watching us he had seen it all and how I'm still not sure he was a big part of why I did it. 

In school, word had spread about what had happened but I played no intention I was sitting at a table at lunch by myself when Jack sat next to me and smiled. I smiled back "hey how are you?" I asked Jack shrugs "I've been better," he said before digging into a ham sandwich. I look at my pathetic chocolate bar before getting up and saying bye to Jack. I walk into my classroom and see and note on my desk it says "I know what you did" I looked around before ripping the note to shreds.