Part 2

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Setting- The day after Marisol's birthday, August 19th 2023, 3:00 am

Marisol: Oh my god... this is... oh my god, wow...

Marisol slowly walks into the room, Chris watches her from behind for her reaction.

Marisol slowly walks into the room, Chris watches her from behind for her reaction

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Marisol to Chris: Did u... really do all this?

Marisol walks along the trail of roses and candles.

Marisol to Chris: Wow, look at this view, it's amazing!

Marisol places her hand on the screen door, watching the white foamy water roll over and settle onto the sand in the distance

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Marisol places her hand on the screen door, watching the white foamy water roll over and settle onto the sand in the distance.

Marisol to Chris: How did u even pay for all this?

Chris to Marisol: I've been saving up for about a year now, when we said that for your 18th birthday we were going to go to the shore and stay in a hotel.

Chris closes and locks the door, he slowly walks to Marisol, while she admires the view, Chris admires his own view.

Chris to Marisol: U know, this is the honeymoon suite.

Marisol to Chris: Honeymoon? But we're not on our honeymoon. U could have just asked for a regular room- I'm really grateful of course, but u didn't have to do all this.

Chris to Marisol: It's not our honeymoon but it is August 19th; our anniversary.

Chris spins Marisol around, Marisol's back presses on the warm glass balcony door. Marisol places her hands on Chris' shoulders.

Marisol to Chris: Tell me more about the honeymoon suite.

Chris to Marisol: Well u know what these rooms are specifically made for?

Marisol to Chris: What?

Chris whispers in Marisol's ear. She closes her eyes for a quick second to envision Chris' words.

Marisol to Chris: But won't it look weird if we're gone for... however long (laughing)

Chris to Marisol: I told Jace that we were going to get drinks for the hotel party. Which means that we have enough time to do...

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⏰ Last updated: Feb 19, 2020 ⏰

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