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In Murthy Empire(at 3)
Manik collide with mukthi and went to help her, but mukthi showed her hand
"I can help myself" mukthi said rudely. Manik was just standing and looking at her with an emotionless face.
He tries to speak "highness I am sor...." But mukthi cut him "wow!!! Senapati ji u said sorry, I can't believe it. Acha from when u started saying sorry and all and even you're helping others. Please don't become good suddenly because it doesn't suit you". And she walks away. Manik just closed his fist and hit the wall in anger till the blood came.
Manik pov-"manik don't be weak and don't listen to anyone. Just do what your mind says. You right on your path Manik"
But suddenly his subconscious" Mr.monster in anger you forgot the work the king gave" and Manik closed his eyes and said irritably.
"Urgh. I know, you no need to say"
Manik subconscious-" yes u know everything that only u lost yourself in our princess".
Manik stammered" I didn't lose to her. She only lost in me and yaa she is not yours okay"said the last four strictly.
Manik subconscious"ooh not mine then your princess aa??" . And Manik said irritably 'shut up and close his subconscious and walk away.
" If he is the same Manik who was in pain a few seconds ago, but he heard about Nandini his pain went away shh don't tell this to manik" Manik subconscious said to readers.
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In Princess Room (at night)
Nandini is standing in front of the window and doing her favourite work . What let see
"Why my Manik not loving me, is I so bad, or I am not beautiful" Nandini cutely asks her moon uncle as to her habit of complaining about her monstu to moon, and she even talks to bunnies that her puppies are in the garden. She is a pure soul on Earth , even beautiful.
She continued" say na moon uncle, why Manik is like this I know he is a monster that what everyone says but only I can see the pain in eye, I wanted to heal him, but he is not allowing".
And she went to the bed to sleep, and prayed to Ayyappa" Ayyappa please keep everyone in the world happy and healthy. Give small punishments to those who and all do wrong and give some brain to my monstu hehe and keep him and my family happy. Don't know why I am feeling like something is going to happen tomorrow. Please make everything good. And finally u sleep well good night Ayyappa."saying everything cutely Nandini slept immediately to dream about her monstu.
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Morning
At garden
Manik is practising his sword fight skillfully. He doesn't know that someone has been admiring him for a long time, that is our Nandini who is looking at him from her balcony from where the garden and training area is clearly visible. Someone came from the back and kept hand on shoulder but our Nandini was so lost in her monstu didn't pay any attention to it.
The person said loudly" oh by seeing your Manik you even forgot your childhood friend Nandini this so bad, go I am angry with you"
Nandini came to her thoughts by hearing her best friend Navya voice, she said cutely "no Navya is not like that, how can I forget a wonderful friend like you".
Navya said "don't be so cute Nandini or else I will eat your bubbly check" and Nandini immediately with wide eye cover her check with hand "no please and Navya started laughing at her cute friend.
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Royal Possession(republishing)
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