This story is a Scar love story. No Zira will not be in this story! She will be mentioned some but she will not make an appearance in this story. My oc will not be a Mary Sue because she will have flaws and she won't be perfect. I despise Mary Sue's.
For example:
An oc is shy and a loner and then all of a sudden she meets someone she adores and turns into this hyper,loud,friendly badass person. No it does not work like that! If she is shy and a loner,keep her timid and friendly with 2 or 3 people. Don't make her loud and have friends everywhere.
I also despise when people make stories about a show or something they really like and are half-assed writing it. If you like it write it.
Like when they do this
Naruto:*pouts*I don't like you,sakura-chan.
This is ridiculous. You are not writing a script for a movie or something so do this instead
Naruto pouts,"I don't like you,Sakura-chan."
See much better but anyway,enough of my ranting-on to the story.
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Vengeful Love(Lion King fanfic)
FanfictionA Scar love story. Miujiza is the younger sister of Zira and at the young age of 2 days is left to die on the border of pride rock by their mother. She is found and raised as the sister of Sarabi. She meets Mufasa and Taka(Scar) where she is promise...
