Once I woke up in a world full of black with a path of white. The pathway turned in knots, loops and hills. All I had on my mind was, "I need to get out."
I walked endlessly down the twists and turns of this place, scenery that passed by looked all the same, like a black screen with white lines. There was no concept of time where I was and everything just seems so still. After countless hours, days, months or years of walking down this path I came upon a tree. This tree was all red, the bark,leaves ,and roots all of it were red. Somehow it all seems so familiar. The leaves waved at me like saying hi to an old friend. Voices in the wind calling me saying, "come here...you're safe here." The Voices repeated the saying over and over.... It was like my feet have a mind of their own. I started walking to the tree, but my mind wasn't moving, my spirit was sitting there watching my body have a mind of its own, walking to this tree. As my body reached the tree a liquid, something like blood, reached out to my body. While this is happening everything is fading to red like a massacre happened right in front of my eyes or a video game screen you see when a character dies.
All I saw was red. After a while I lost consciousness, I don't know how long I was out but, when I woke up I was in a white room hooked up to a machine that was beeping. Next thing I knew my family ran in and hugged me, all crying tears. My family was rather frightened by the next thing I said or rather asked, "what happened to the black room?"
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Aaaaannnnd.....done! Hope y'all like it and let me know what y'all think! Critiques are always welcome!
Until next time~
-Blac-chan
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Weird short stories
General FictionSoooo....this is my first book any tips and critiques are welcome. . . . . In theses worlds, you will look through a character's memory or dream and experience what they see, hear, and think during the dream or memory. (All in first pov!)
