Hi all, I made a story about Halloween. Read if like, or not. If you like it, great! Im glad you like it. Anywayz, here it is... Enjoy and Tell me what you think.
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Jack and Jill Go into a Hole!
“Thump Thump Thump” The floor pounded as two joyful little children bounced down the stairs. A typical blond bobbed hair boy landed down stairs first. He is Jack, his green power ranger costume looked adorable on him. He ran around throwing fake punches. A curly blonde haired girl gracefully landed behind him. She danced and twirled her magic wand, that is Jill. She dressed as pretty fairy…in her own words. “Mom! Mom!” The children surrounded their mother, and giggling. “Ok ok wait a minute..now go sit in the living room.” They scurried away. She finished cooking and sighed. The mother found the kids watching cartoons, she called for them and gave them a bucket each. Before sending them off at the door, “ Be back before 9pm.” the mother said with a warm smile. Jack and Jill skipped away to random houses.
The sun was waving farewell as it departed in a orangey-red glow. A numerous landscape filled with scary decoration. Spiders crept along the corners, skeletons paraded house to house, and witches cackles filled the dimming neighborhood. A multitude of young children crowding homes hoping to get sweet stuff. Jack and Jill grinned saying “Trick or treat! Hehe” they were rewarded with a fistful of candy. “Thank you!” running to another haunting home. Jill's skin suddenly shivered “Umm..brother let's not go here” “Why?”
“I got a weird feeling..”
“Your not scared, are you?” Jack joked. He pulled her as he ran up the slight steep. Rung the doorbell, a ghoulish laugh greeted. “See not scary at all,” Jack was shaking after hearing the doorbell. A vampire came to the door scaring the wits out the little children. “duddfyygiuguu…Man, I cant talk in these things” The man removed the fake fangs and his speech cleared up. “Hi kids, do you want this?” Jill nodded with a cute smile. He held out some candy never seen before, it hopped and jiggled in the bowl. There was a slight glow coming from the sweets. They stared intrigued “Try some..” His voice had a persuasive tone. They grabbed some then left. Jill looked at the recent candy and decided to try it. “Mmm!” loving it she nagged Jack to try some, He agreed.
The world around them warped as they ate it.
It looked similar but now the candy wasn’t just jiggling, it was talking “Hey! Hey! Hey!” The kids dropped their bucket then looked to each other thinking When did candy talk. They looked around. Miniature skeleton skipped along, Big headed animals bobbed In leisure, purple-skinned dolls with large cone hats hurried with hand full of papers, and of course the candy had long skinny legs and spoke. The plants were all warped. Tall, short, inbetween ; oddly shaped plants and anti gravity homes. There was no order to be seen. The kids stared in disbelief then Jill cried. Instantly time froze all eyes on them. All the nearby creature chased the children; up the street and down the street and straight up in the sky. They hid in a huge lime-blue pickle, “something smells funny..” Jack thought out loud. They realized they were inside a vegetable and hated vegetables. The way they entered was gone, then green blisters popped around them and a slim-like goop started risings. Rising, til it neared their feet. Steam rose from the bubbling goop, It was beginning to eat through their shoes. Jack somehow dig a hole to the outer skin and kicked a hole. Jill jumped first even though she was frightened to def. Her brother followed, they landed on a semi-liquid pool. Relief set-in as it looked liked they were safe.
“Found you! Found you! Found you! Look out! Look out! Look out!” Talking candy leaping by the edge of the pool. Slight vibrations began, a snake rose up. But, not a snake, a serpent with a long neck and huge body towered over the children. “Uh-oh...” escaped jill's breath. It dove down with its mouth wide open. It managed to miss them, the kids ended up on monsters head. They slid down its neck and landed on a mushroom. They were near the main street again. A little dark pixie whistled and all the eyes somehow found the children and chased them through the twisted world again. “Don't eat those! Don't eat those! Don't eat those! They are evil! They are evil! They are evil!” The talking candy caught up with them. “What do they mean?” Jack thought out loud. “there!” Jill pointed, there was stalks of black liquorish. Jill loved them, by the way. She ate a whole stalk and Jack saw her turn invisible “Jill!” then poof. The mobbed almost grabbed him but then he tried the black liquorish. He too poofed.
On the other side, Jill saw a light by her and Jack materialized. He landed hard on his butt. “W-where a-are we?” Jack asked. The children were in the middle of the road near the end of there street. Jill cried. “Hey its ok..lets go home..” Jack comforted his sister. They watched other normal kids pass by, “Don't eat that!!” they screamed. Jack and Jill soon ran home frightened to deaf. As soon as they got home, they clung to there mothers legs tightly. “ Looks like to two ate a lot of candy, am I right? Or did you get scared?” She smiled, they still shivering. “I have apple pie, want some?” A light appeared in their eyes, they nodded with a big grin.
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