Hello,
I have decided to rewrite this story because while it is not a bad story, it has a lot of plot holes and is kind of cliche to me. I have already revised the new version.
There are a number of reasons why I have decided to revise the story, such as:
- poor character development
- plot holes
- it is very hard to write the sequel when really it should just end as it does.
The story will be the same but less confusing. Like I personally do not like how Yoongi's character development evolves and then goes straight back to the beginning with no clear explanation. The revised version will have 17 chapters including an epilogue.
On Monday March 30th, I will be posting the first chapter, and on the 31st and 1st I will be posting two additional chapters. From there I will update the story twice a week on Tuesdays and Wednesdays. Once this story is completed the sequel will also be released!
I have many stories that I have been working on for years, and I finally feel now is the time to release them. If you have any questions just comment and I'll try to respond!
