Writing Challenges

The end

I wake up in a void a cold desolate void. I look arounf and see darkness not even my own breath from the cold. I sigh as I have been stuck there for a few years now and sit again pointless to wander in the void and I rewatch and relive the most painful memory, her death.
I lay there on the ground one eye swollen the taste of blood in my mouth confused dazed my clothes tattered and shredded showing the red skin I have bleeding a darker color of my skin and the leader looks down at me and scoffs, "Pitifull thought a demon like you could actually stand a chance wheres the new blood." A timid dragonborn walks out his armor and skin mix being gold and the big man hands him a sword and it shakes in his hand, "Gerald finish this demon." He pushes him foreward as I lay there and struggles to lift the blade up, "I-I-I can't do this hes innocent." The big man puts a hand on his shoulder grabbing his hand. Though the dragon born almost dwarfs him shear mass the man still forces his hands to raise as he states, "But he has done wrong he exists a lesser fiend of a dark lord born onto the material plain taking human jobs and human lovers thats what were here to do cleanse them and after we kill him we bathe the woman in our holyness dont you understand Gerald." His hands are straight up ready to swing down, "Just put some force and let gravity work to get through his skin and armor." I look at the sword unphased but widen as he starts to close his eyes and brimg it down soon following a shadow of a small female frame yelling stop but cut short as a blade cleaves into her sholder and at an angle squirting her blood all over me and then theres a collective gasp and the sword leaves and everyone leaves except the golden dragonborn who stands there shocked unable to move staring at my wifes dead body as I hold her in my arms sobbing and as he tries to stammer out something another one of the clerics having diamonds on their armor comes grabbing the young dragon born rumming with him say, "Come Gerald we need to leave!" Followed by the dragonborns voice, "But the diamonds." And that cleric saying, "The dimonds are to be used for holy means not to cover up some accident to a feind."
And like that I remember the countless loveless nights as the man I know as my father walks up his icey presence clashing with mine. "Why pain yourself like this son?" He asks as I turn around and begin walking into the void. Leaving him answerless and alone. I'm trapped in my own body unable to leave. I died and he took over but that leaves me alive at least but the continuous torture of not being there and not getting my revenge against those Paladins and clerics and breaking that boy out of their clutches.
I sigh in the void knowing its been months but suddenly I'm hit with a force a massive force and I see a blinding light I have to sheild my eyes as I look and see a...PLATNIUM DRAGON. He looks to me, "Threnstin I presume." I kneel, "yes Bahamet king of metal dragons." He uses a claw and stands me up, "Rise there young Teifling a man has wished for your freedom and happiness in return of his life." Just then a blinding of gold light shines and I'm met with the dragon born from that day, "Hey I wanted to say..." I cut him off, "No need I understand I know you didnt mean to and you've righted your wrongs yourself I never hated you." He looked at me stunned, "But I killed your wife and and ended your dream of happiness." I just smiled though he was righ I knew he was couresed into doing so and even tried to bring her back, "That you did but though it was your hands holding the weapon it wasnt you it was your leader's weapons and actions that did it and at the end you tried to get her back." I hugged him, "I just wish this wasnt the last time I'd see you alive but I know this magic and there are always repercussions." He nodded as when I blinked I was back in my own body in control and normal but what  I didnt expect was to see my wife there walking towards me with a small child. I had ran to her and hugged her tightly and the child hugged my leg saying, "Dad I can see you now." I just knelt and rubbed his head. "And I thought I'd never see you young one." He smiled as Elaine told me, "his name is George like you wanted." I smiled as I picked him up, "Well George your dads got a lot to catch you up on." He just smiled as I took my wife's hand walked of heading to the direction of home.

This was my dnd character from a campaign where shit just was straight crazy all over and one of my favs from the campaign.