(I N T R O)
I see you now, standing there, and i dont know what to do,
You barely know my name and i know all about you.
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I'm sitting here, in the corner and admiring from a distance,
You chat away, with your mates, not acknowledging my existence.
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Should i go up to you and try and have a chat?
No, that would look too weird and i really don't want that.
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We met through music so i thought it'd be fitting to write a song,
Not that i'd ever let you hear it cos it would all just go so wrong.
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I'm going through all the possibilities and still coming up blank,
I don't even think you want to talk to me, to be frank.
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You live quite far away you see so that could make things a bit hard,
Maybe i could be sneaky and send you an unnamed Valentines card?
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I know you're so great and everything, so why would you ever want me?
I've got a few mates, not many enemies but i aint no queen bee.
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I've facebook stalked you and i know you can't dance,
I could maybe teach you a few moves and we could have our own little romance.
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I'm kidding myself, I have got no hope,
Unless I could get you really drunk, on a train, and we could elope.
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You don't realise it, but you've got my heart,
Not sure its proper love just yet, but there has been something from the start.
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How can i impress you, and get you to be mine?
I think about asking you out all the time,
but i can't help feeling,
that you'll decline.
(O U T R O)
Heya darlin, just some food for thought perhaps? knocked this piece of crap out in 45 minutes so clearly you can do much much better, no excuses now pisces, if i can do it- you can do it better! you know what i called your "funny" voice? like the start of im a nerd? thats how i imagine you singing this, kind of light hearted and slows towards the end. the little -- mean like maybe a little strummy thing, little interval. or come up with a chorus (i think it really needs one!) and shove them into verses by all means. personally i wouldn't bother with this rubbish and just work on your two amazing songs but if you do think you could maybe do something with this then go for it- its for you. you've got the hard part- THE MUSIC dun dun duhhhh :D its pretty short too mmm, i may add some more couplets. you're my favourite artist and can't wait for more lyrical musical genius so get cracking :) lots of love, Ames xxx
