The Bandit ( larryau)

In depth explanation

*exhales *okay , hi .. so I'm doing in depth explanation. It seems like my first explanation did the bare minimum so I'm going to do this by chapters

- I want everyone to understand my writing style is inspired by André Aciman and Bret Easton Ellis when I first read American psycho I became angry , I couldn't understand I was so used to books that gave me the answer directly while American psycho did not , I also take great inspiration in F. Scott Fitzgerald . If you have ever read the great gastby you wouldn't know from verbal writing that the main character/ narrator was homosexual

-yes go back to the great gastby and reread the beautiful words . He awakens in bed with a man naked but it's up to readers to know what happened- that's called good writing and in my opinion my writing is amazing

So let's break down chapter 1

" what's your name love ?"

The man whimpered " vam- vampires aren't allowed in here ."

"Well the rules have no apply to me ." Smirking , a smirk that showed nothing but true intentions . - vampires are known , they are higher up in social ladder but humans are allowed to ban vampires from their establishments.

- remember the parts in italics is because Harry can mind read, this allows you - the reader to understand okay he's in the humans mind .

Chapter 2 -

"M- my daughter, uhm -" she trailed off looking down in shame . It wasn't hard to put two together and Harry wasn't one to dwell on miss information.

" does he have any pictures-" he leaned forward " if so I will need those , man like him are usually overly sick and after I'm done with him , his whole career will see what kind of freak he was ."

-red vampire room is where humans and vampires coexist, this is where Harry also works . I've seen a lot of comments confused on this part , this woman comes in and obviously she wants Harrys help , she wants him to kill her husband why ? Because he has touched their daughter. Some stuff is self explanatory obviously the husband has done this more than once and the wife finally got the courage to put a stop to it .

Chapter 3 -

Only one vampire can have a certain ability and when they die it's given down to a special family member, Burgess was the only vampire to mind read ..... Harry is the only vampire to mind read .

-LITERALLY SAYS FAMILY MEMBER !! Burgess and Harry are related , he died and Harry( his )family member centuries later got the ability to mind read .

- burgess was burned on a cross along with his family .. I explained his death in chapter 2

From then on it shouldn't be confusing. My writing style is a mixture of authors if you are looking for a childish fanfic where it's just constant no ends and full of immature writing be my guess .