Can Anybody Hear Me

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main characters-Netra *top right*,Lonzo*bottom right*,Roc, Erykah*top left*

introduction:

Lonzo,Erykah,and Netra are best friends. they been best friends since diapers..netra has a boyfriend his name is Chernesto but she call him roc. Netra lives with her mom and dad...they abuse her. she gets abused by roc too...then wen she goes to school she covers up all her marks and she doesn't talk to nun of her friends because she doesn't want them to know what's going on. Lonzo is gettin tired of netra not talking to him...Lonzo wants to be with netra but netra is afraid to love again because of wat roc is doing to her.

Netra (knee tra)- wassupp bitches

netra in da building...I'm 16 and I'm ery's bestie/sissy...I live with my mom(rihanna) and dad (Chris brown). I have no brothers or sisters...in squad (our clique) I'm the one everybody get long with...I ain't with the drama so save it fa ya mama but let a bitch try me or anybody in squad best believe I'm throwin hands....ooohh yeah I have a boyfriend his name is Chernesto we been going out for 3 years and past couple of months he's been getting abusive but he just feeling down because his mother just passed away....R.I.P mama but I love him to much to let him go

Erykah (erica)- hey im erykah or ery...I'm 16 and I've been best friends with netra since diapers...I live with dad (trey songz) my mom left me wen I was 4 because she was on drugs but one day i hope to see her but ever since I've been living then i've been living with my dad.. and he treats me like a queen...in squad im the who likes to turn up all the time n everybody kno I don't play so they kno not to try me or squad

lonzo - wattup y'all I'm Lonzo and I'm 16 and I'm older than both netra and erykah... I play football and basketball I'm raw asf doee... I live with my parents I'm the oldest out of 2... I really like netra but she goes out with roc n lately he been treating her like shit and I don't like it at all...I've notice bruises on her arms and sometimes her face it makes me mad to see her like that....she usually is really loud and hype but now the past months she's been really quiet...but I plan on making her mine on day....ohh I forgot...in squad I'm the that everybody knows

Chernesto aka roc-wassup its ya boy roc...I'm 16 i live by myself cuz ya kno a nigga got dat money to do his own shit...my moms past away couple months again and I'm not over it yet.my mom was everything to me and after I lost her i went crazy.i have a girlfriend name netra dats bae we been going out for three years but past couple of months i been abusing her i dont know why i do it thoe.. it juss feels good to let my anger out on someone i know who wont fight back n i always threaten her so she wont leave me cuz i know ole girl will leave in a heart beat but in squad im the fun one

What yall think??

Will lonzo save netra from roc??

Did i get a good start??

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