The Stars(currently rewriting)

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Oh shit how the hell I got my self in this situation I said to my self desperately trying to escape this jail cell.  Some guards came in saying come on the king is requesting your assistance. They took me up the palce to the kings room I saw the king he looked really mad. The king told the guards to leave then he came up to me and said who are you?what are you?. I looked at him in a weird way and said I told you already my name is mark Hamilton and don't remember any thing else.

"Don't lie to me"the king said

"Look at you"

"Your clothes is different from ours" 

"The way you talk is different from ours"

"Even your appearance is different from ours"

Then he grabbed my shirt and started yelling so I grabbed him back and punched him a few seconds later the guards came and grabbed me the king took advantage and slapped me. He said very infuriated "how dare you lay a finger on me" then he said that I was going to fight for my life in the arena. So they took me down stairs again then the guards started to beat me up then they threw me to the jail cell. I was just laying there all hurt and couldn't even move. Then I  heard a voice saying don't worry you will get used to it I looked over to my side and notice a very thin man he had a bushy black beard and looked very tall.

Then the man yelled out his name his name was daroff then I told him my name he asked me what I  got locked up

For then I  told that I punched the king his eyes got very wide then he said

"That is very brave of you "said Daroff

"I wish I could get a chance to put that asshole out"

"What did you do to get locked up  "said mark

"Nothing"said daroff

"How did you get locked up for doing nothing"said Mark

"I will tell you how"

Daroff POV

I saw this kid getting beat up some guards and wondered what did he do then he got thrown into the same jail cell as Im in I saw him laying there defeated. So I told him that he will get used to it he turned his head around looking at me surprised he asked me what was my name I told him my name. He told me his name I asked why was he here he said he punched the king in the face I was surprised that he did something so brave. He asked me why was I in the dungeon I told him I didn't do anything he asked me how so i started telling him. I was a general in the kings army I had every thing money a beautiful wife and glory but the Spartans declared war on us the Spartans where the strongest of all time we where really worried. We have been in war for months we were losing most of are men were dead.

We needed a plan a good plan me and the king were in a tent figuring out  how to defeat the Spartans until one of our spys came in saying that the Spartans were taking a break at their camp site which gave me a idea. Later that same night we attacked the Spartans right in their camp it was a brilliant strategy they were unprepared and we attacked we defeated them all. We left that battle victorious and legandary the tales spreaded quickly about a powerful general that destroyed the Spartans. They started saying rumors on how I was a god and could defeat an entire army all by my self.

I figured the king didn't like that and started to envy me one day he invited me to a banquet while i was drinking my wine I felt weird dizzy and weak then I figured out it was poison. I blacked out and woke up next to a dead lady,that lady was the kings daughter then the king started calling the guards saying that I killed his daughter while I was being taking I saw the smirk on his face I was infuriated every body else in the banquet saw what really happened and they didnt say anything. I was humiliated every body knew what they thought I did I lost my honor and was thrown in the dungeon I preferred that he killed me than humilliate me like that. That is how I got locked in here and then moments later the gaurds came  and took the boy.

Mark POV

The guards took me to this weird place they gave me a helmet and said good luck kid your gonna need it I was worried. after a few minutes they pushed me outside of a gate into a arena I heard The crowd chanting and screaming cornillious,cornillious,cornillious then when I looked ahead I saw this huge dude that was insanely muscular and had a huge sword. He came running after and then he swung his sword toward my head I ducked I saw a sword laying in the ground so I ran towards it. The man was right behind me I felt he was going to swing his sword at me so I slide to the sword grabbed it and blocked his attack from behind. He kept on swinging but I kept blocking the reason I knew how to use a sword is because I used to take fencing classes. He attacked one more time I used a move where I grabbed his sword took it away from him and then stabbed him with both of the swords I had.

The whole crowd was surprised and the started cheering but I wasn't even excited I was looking at the corpse of the man I took the life  away from. Then I thought to my self if I didn't defended my self I would have been dead I got to get out of here I said to my self. Then the guards took me to where the king was the king said impressive you killed one of my best gladiators. Starting tomorrow you are doing to be a gladiator then he took me back to the dungeon daroff looked at me surprised you got out alive good.

Then me and daroff just stayed there sitting without saying a word until suddenly I heard an explosion the whole dungeon was full of smoke. I couldn't see anything all I heard were swords connecting and prisoners screaming then are cell opened all I saw was a huge figure the smoke cleared. Davidoff said Achilles what are you doing here then for a moment i was thinking that name sounded very familliar then I remembered that achilles was the hero of the Trojan war. Daroff seemed to know him he asked him what are you doing here achilles said to bust you out then Davidoff said that he bring me with him he the look on his face was like he did not like that,"okay you could bring him" said achilles we stood up and started running.

That's the end of this chapter sorry it took so long I was busy with school hope you enjoy vote if you like  it and plz follow bye!!