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First of all, thank you so much for submitting! So let's analyze here then! I really like this style, it seems simple and easy! So— this is just a personal advice here. For the shading under the neck there is a place all blueish-black, and it looks a bit too straightforward. The shape personally for me also look a bit off, since I would image it match a bit with the face more. You can try testing out different ways, but for my first entry here it's so nice to see such a good artist! :> ^ You can try out my suggestions and see which you're comfortable with! So I attached some pictures beneath here!
And just a little tip, I suggest you to add watermarks in case of people stealing your art. :>
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Here are just changed the shape of the shadow ^
And I personally made a big watermark! It's free, you may use it as you please. You don't need to credit me.
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Just delete the white background with the selection tool, and you could overlay it. Just it freely, I do not ask for any sorts of credits.
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Another example^
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And I just want to point of these lines, I don't know if you noticed. However you may consider changing. :)
Alright, so I actually contacted a professional artist for the next one since my eyes can't see what needs to be fixed— it's my teacher's friend so basically this is what he had to say. (I am not the best at anatomy, around the end of this month I would be getting a new teacher whom possibly could teach me human anatomy. :] )
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So, he said that the eyes doesn't really look natural if it is looking at you, however once again it's a choice.
!The second thing is that the eyes would be smaller and a bit more wider. (This is an anatomy problem, and the best way to fix it is actually to study realistic art. In short terms, anime is like realistic but simpler, you can try and learn the basics!) :)
Here I would be attaching some side views for you !
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Alright then, thank you so much for submitting! Besides that, I want to say, your art looks great! :>
Notice: Would I contact a professional artist for everyone?
A: No, only the ones I struggle to review or hard to spot. Watercolors are probably the best to send in since my main teacher actually focuses on watercolor. XD
