Help with Stories

Help with Stories A/N Pt 2

Hunter X Hunter

Okay. So my idea with this anime franchise is to have the reader be Gon's older (sister) by two years. I want to add another member to the Zoldyck family be the same age as the reader and for them to be best friends like Gon and Killua because everyone wants a friendship like that. You know how Kurapika left his clan to find a medicine for his best friend. I want Pairo to be alive. With Leorio I want him to have another friend that was there when his friend with the sickness/disease died. Now I'm going to give a little information and background about the characters and how that little group left. Also I'll be making Leorio and Kurapika younger by a year. Also like I said anything in parenthesis you can change to fit your character or you can keep it the same. I'm gonna be using the name Akira that I came up with (even though they're the same name).

Reader: (Akira) Freecs

Age: 14

Phantom Troupe Number: 13

Backstory: Ging brings Gon to Mito I believe when Gon was 2. So (Akira) would be 4. At the age of about 7 a few of the Phantom Troupe kidnapped (her) (I know the Kurta Clan Massacre happened four years before the actual story starts, but I believe they already had a name for themselves) on Chrollo's order. (She) was with them for a year before meeting the Zoldyck kid that's her age. After that meeting they stuck together (So the Zoldyck kid basically joined the Troupe). Two years later is when the Kurta Clan Massacre happens. The two of them came across Pairo and convinced Chrollo to let him live, but he had to join the Troupe. Another year later they meet Leorio's friend after he basically found them walking around bleeding. After that he joined the Troupe and they stuck together since then. Leorio's friend and the Zoldyck kid take the Hunter's Exam a year before Gon and the gang take it (The one Hisoka is disqualified from) and pass. Then (Akira) and Pairo take the Hunter's Exam a year later (The one Gon and the gang take) and that's where the actual story starts.

Name: Nanashi Zoldyck

Age: 14

Phantom Troupe Number: 14

Backstory: Like Killua he was also trained to be an assassin. He met (Akira) while doing a job. (Look above cause the rest is basically the same after the word "age").

Name: Pairo Kurta

Age: 16 (I don't know what age he was when Kurapika left, but since I'm changing Kurapika's age by a year they'll be the same age)

Phantom Troupe Number: 15

Backstory: Six weeks after Kurapika left to get medicine for him, the Phantom Troupe struck. He ran away from the members and hid inside a house. He was there for a little while before two kids younger then him found him. After that the Phantom Troupe came inside the house. The two kids convinced the leader to let him live, but he had to join the Troupe. He agreed because he wanted to live. About two weeks after that Chrollo took him to the doctors to get that medicine. About two months later he finally became friends with (Akira) and Nanashi (He hated them at first). (Look above at (Akira)'s backstory cause it's basically the same after the word "Troupe").

Name: Kisho Hiroaki

Age: 17 (I'm also changing Leorio's age by a year)

Phantom Troupe Number: 16

Backstory: Like Leorio he watched their friend die. He also wanted to become a doctor and work with Leorio. He met the three one night after seeing them walking around bleeding. After that he learned what happened to them. (Look above at (Akira)'s backstory cause it's the same after the word "then").

That's basically what I want to do with this story. Now I want you to imagine something. I have an example of something, but it might not be good. But as long as you understand what I mean that it'll make since. Imagine someone having a dog. That person wants to put the dog in their back or front yard, but they don't have a fence and the dog will run away. So they get one of the leash/chains for dogs that they can attack to a little stick in the ground so they dog can't leave the yard. And even if the dog escapes, the owners will find them anyway. That's how it is for (Akira) and Pairo. The Troupe doesn't care what they do, but keeps an eye on them so they don't run away. They're basically chained to the Troupe. If they do the Troupe will find them not matter what. But when it comes to Nanashi and Kisho, Chrollo said that they can leave the Troupe whenever they want and that he doesn't care. But those two stay cause they're friends with the other two and think of them as family. Anyway that's my idea with this franchise. Tell me what you think and if I should create this story. Now on to the next one.