why(new version)

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So I've decided to rewrite the first chapter of this story just because I hated it and im sure you hated it to.
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' '= thoughts
" "= speaking

So a little bit of backstory you were going to your girlfriends house because she agreed to hang out with you.

YN texts: hey im here

But no response

YN texts: where are you?

Nothing

'ok whats happening why isnt she answering?. Maybe she's taking a shower, I'll just check to see if she left the front door open.'

As he was turning the door knob he noticed it was unlocked, maybe she is taking a shower and left it open for him.

YN: "Well I might as well go she's basically inviting me in"

As he wen't inside he smelled something really bad as if cheese was left out for to long or even milk.

YN was now going upstairs to his gfs room but he heard moaning and thought nothing of the sort but it got louder and louder as he got closer and closer to caseys room. ( I already hate the name I gave the girl)

'As i got closer i saw my third worst fear, casey cheating. But why? And with with who?'

As he checks he immediately regrets it, because it was his best friend chad.

'Oh god not chad. How could he do this!!'

Now lets listen to what theyre saying shall we.

Casey: "OH GOD YESSS!!!! KEEP PUMPING YOUR DICK INSIDE ME!!!!!!!"

Aaaaaaaand i wish we didnt listen
At this point YN is having a full mental breakdown but quietly.

'Well whats the point of staying here all i see is a slut and a chad'

After that YN just runs away

Timeskip

After running he enters his house and goes up to his room.

YN: "why me of all people!! Nothing good ever happens to me!!"

YN then takes out a knife and cuts his arm not in a suicidal way but like yuri from ddlc

YN: "aghh, i have to clean this up before anybody notices."

(Timeskip to the next day)

'God why do i still have to come to school'

Chad: "hey YN"

YN: "what do you want"

He said in a monotone voice and avoiding eye contact with him

Chad: "YN whats wrong"

YN: "whats wrong!!,WHATS WRONG!!! I saw you fucking my girlfriend man thats WHATS WRONG"

chad: "well if you would've had sex with her none of this would ever have happened!!!"

YN: "Oh so now your blaming it on me!!! Even though you couldve said no and then we wouldn't have to argue about this!!!! But nooo its MY fault!!!"

Chad: "you know what YN fuck you and our friendship and let it burn in hell"

YN: "well im better off dead than with you"

At this point people were listening to the argument in disbelief 2 of the most popular guys in the school having an argument about YNs girlfriend and how she cheated on him

(Timeskip to lunch)

'Time to confront that bitch'

YN: "Hey Casey!!"

Casey: "yeah?"

YN: "I saw you cheating on me with chad!!!"

Casey: "well im glad you did i honestly didn't care about you. I only used you for power!"

YN starts crying and runs back home
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So i remade this chapter because i thought the original was cringy af. Peace

 Peace

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