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Next morning everyone woke up and all the girls went to Navni's room to get ready other side boys came down after getting readyCabir
Manik
Dhruv
Arya
Abhi
Arya:guys let's go to breakfast table till the girls come
Cabir: Chalo let's go
Manik:but let's wait for the girls na why so hurry
Dhruv: Arre at least let's get settle on the table
Abhi: manik is right let's wait for them na all will eat together
Voice: guys leave them these two are bhukad only here are weRight to left
Nandu, navya, mukti, alia
Nandu:mayu Chalo let's eat
Navu:ha Bhai chalo
Mukti:hero chalo
Alia:maine Kisko Bhai bolu??
Abinik:hum dono ko
Alia:yeahh,mere pass do Bhai
Mukni: yeah humari ek aur behen
Navu: so we officially declare our self as soul sisters
Muknilya:a hell yessss!!!!
Cabman: don't you guys want to have breakfast
Navu:cabir ji stop being a bhukhadd and we are coming so shut up
Mukti: wow navya I am highly impressed your have made the cabir malhotra left with no come back, I love u girl
Navya:i love u too
Nanliya:even we love u
Abhinik: guys can we plz have bout breakfast
Nandu: Ya let's go after that we have to leave for trecking
Navya:thats not fair u didn't say me
Nandu:navu last time u won this time let's see who win last time you that monkey cheated and I didnt had Mayu par ab dekhte hai
Navya: Ya let's see I will only win
Nandu: Ya right with that monkey u want to win let's see
Arya:yaar meri bezati Kyu Kar rahi ho dono, jo hai apne Maine dekho
Nandu:am because of u only she won last time
All except navya and Abhi: am??
Abhinav:aryaman the monkey
All:oh
Arya:i am not monkey u chudail
Nandu:i am not chudail
Arya:ya right and Eiffel Tower is in India
Nandu:arya Bhai u monkey u are gone
And standing up no literally pushing their chairs they ran in the hall
Arya saving himself and nandu running behind him to kill him
And suddenly nandu starts to breath fast and with a thud sits on the sofa, seeing this arya ran towards her and shouts
Arya :abhii,navu come quickly
Abhi listening this run out and others run behind him
Abhi: arya what happened to her
Arya: I don't know she just started breathing heavily and with a thud sat on the sofa
Abhi:are u mad I have always told u don't make her run much
Navu:bhai she is not opening her eyes bhai
Navya eyes were teary and seeing her every one got tensed and Alia went and hugged her to calm her down where as mukti went to nandu and started rubbing her hands
Navya :alu tell her na she is not opening her eyes
Continuously saying this she fainted
Arya: navu open your eyes navu
Abhi: arya bring my bag quick go fast go.
And arya runs to bring the bag while everyone else were trying what is happening
Arya gets the bag and Abhi takes an injection and injects nandu and navu
And then makes them sleep in their room while arya talks to the doctor
Arya:abhi I had called doc he told that there is not to worry much she will get fine in some time and has prescribed medicine and for navu she fainted due to fear and shock so she will get up in some time but we need to make them happy and no stress
Abhi angrily marched towards arya and slapped him
Abhi: I have told u thousand times don't make her run but you don't listen to me she is already weak u done that arya like did u even realise that u were making her run behind u for 45 mins like have u done crazy
Arya: sorry Abhi I seriously didn't want her to be in this condition trust me it's just it slipped out of my mind
And has a tinch of tears in his eyes
He really felt bad seeing his cutie and navu baby in this condition
Seeing him Abhi just hugged him as he felt bad to slap him
Abhi: sorry aru I slapped u but u need to understand we can't make her run or we can't make her tired to an extend that this happens she is weak na
And listening this arya bobbed like a child
All the rest were getting curious and happy at the same time seeing their bond
Mukti: Abhi what happened to nandu
Abhi:mukti nothing much actually when baby was born she was born very weak and doctors had told us that she won't survive much cause she already had struggled in mumma's amblical cord to come out
But mumma didn't leave the hope and nor did baby she fought and she survived.
Arya: the doctors were shocked how this happened cause the baby survives the chances to that were very less but it happened. Everything went well but one day when playing in school nandu started breathing heavily and fainted then we took her to hospital
Navu really got affected seeing this cause seeing your twin on the hospital bed was not easy for her.Doctors told that if nandu gets really tired or exude her levels to stretch her self that there will be problem for her cause during she was born amblical cord wrapped to her neck and heart damaged on of nerves and this leads her to faint and is this happens frequantly we may loose her cause her heart won't be able to hold much pressure
Listening to this everyone had tears in their eyes the girls were crying like anything although they didn't spend much time with each other but there was a inseparable bond created between them
Boys also had tears in their eyes listening to this as Navni had become a inseparable part from there life and for so she had turned their life
( my readers are smart you know wholes life they are and guys I am not a biology student so jo dimag Maine aaya woh likh diya)
Manik:isnt there any way to get out of this
Abhi:if it would be then won't I had done it prior
Mukti: can we go to navni
Aliya:yes Pls bhai
Abhi: yes girls u can go bus don't wake them up
Mukliya:ok thanks
Abhi: guys let's go out in some while till the time u guys can rest
Manbir :ok
Dhruv :i will just tell alya
Arya: no need dhruv I am going to my room I will inform them
Dhruv:ok
With this everyone left for their room and arya also informed mukti about the things discueesd down
In abhirya's room
Arya:abhi why u told them
Abhi: I felt like telling then that's why
Arya:par tune pura sach nahi bataya
Abhi:woh sirf hum dono ko pata hai aur Kisi ko nahi,and don't u dare open your mouth
Arya:obviouslybhai I won't
Abhi: OK let me just freshen up then let's go to see our jaans
Manbir's room
Manik:yaar I was feeling so helpless seeing nandu
Cabir:same yaar,sseing navya like this felt like 100 needles piercing my heart
Manik:i didn't know that she went threw this much ,but I don't feel correct
Cabir:bhai u are thinking too much just sleep
Manik moving towards bed
Manik:ok u are right let's rest
But someone heard their conversation
And the person was!!!!!!!!
Not so early guys wait for the next update see u soon bye love u all
This is your writter leaving u in a suspense
What are Abhi and arya hiding
Who was the one to hear Manbir's convo
What will happen ahead are there any problems leading to............
Let's see, see u guys bye
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Teen Fictionthis story is the story I though for a long time Pls try and support it I am a new bee and this is my first book a bit cliche but interesting story